fix(5.0.0): nitpicking and suggestions regarding `on-demand-rendering.mdx` #9673

ArmandPhilippot · 2024-10-14T21:58:05Z

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Updates some code snippet due to some concerns about highlighting (I only updated from the previous/next example but maybe all examples should use the same format: either simple highlighting or ins)
Updates the file name of a code snippet because the usage of Astro.params seemed wrong otherwise
Adds a suggestion regarding Astro.redirect in Response subsection

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ArmandPhilippot · 2024-10-14T21:59:51Z

src/content/docs/en/guides/on-demand-rendering.mdx

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ All other pages are statically-generated at build time!

 The following example shows opting out of prerendering in order to display a random number each time the endpoint is hit:

-```js title="src/pages/randomnumber.js" {1}
+```js title="src/pages/randomnumber.js" ins={1}


nit: The previous example use ins={2}, shouldn't we use the same visual information here? (or the other way around... not covered by my suggestion)

ArmandPhilippot · 2024-10-14T22:01:23Z

src/content/docs/en/guides/on-demand-rendering.mdx


 Then, if needed, you can choose to prerender any individual pages that do not require a server to execute, such as a privacy policy or about page.

-```astro title="src/pages/about-my-app.astro"
+```astro title="src/pages/about-my-app.astro" {2}


Same concern here about the highlighting. The next example uses "highlighting" but we don't use it here. Maybe we should use ins here and in the next example too? (I just updated from the next example)

Sure, let's make them all ins!

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ArmandPhilippot · 2024-10-14T22:02:23Z

src/content/docs/en/guides/on-demand-rendering.mdx


-```astro title="src/pages/my-product.astro" {10,11}
+```astro title="src/pages/product/[id].astro" {10,11}


From my understanding, Astro.params only works with path segments (e.g. [id]). See Astro.params (besides on this page, I wonder if the example should not be above the sentence related to SSR...)

Sorry, where would you place this example?

To avoid any confusion I am talking about the example in the section Astro.params.
Sorry, I didn't detail as it's not related to this PR, it's just by checking Astro.params that I thought the location of the example seemed strange.
The example shows the use of getStaticPaths which is usable with static builds while the sentence just above talks about SSR builds. So what would seem more logical to me would be between the two sentences (In static builds,... > getStaticPaths example > In SSR builds, ...).
But thinking back, I guess that was to avoid isolating the "SSR builds" sentence.

Ah, gotcha now, thanks! Yes, I see what you mean. I think it could be helpful on that page to also have an SSR example maybe? And then yes, the example there above the SSR sentence, which itself gets its own example?

I almost forgot about this comment, sorry. Yes I think it would be useful to show both uses here. 💯 I'm going to prepare a PR.

ArmandPhilippot · 2024-10-14T22:04:51Z

src/content/docs/en/guides/on-demand-rendering.mdx

@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ You can also return a [Response](https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/AP

 The example below returns a 404 on a dynamic page after looking up an ID in the database:

-```astro title="src/pages/[id].astro" {10-13}
+```astro title="src/pages/product/[id].astro" {10-13}


I only updated because that's the path I had used before... it wasn't really a problem, just a matter of consistency.

src/content/docs/en/guides/on-demand-rendering.mdx

Co-authored-by: Matthew Justice <[email protected]>

src/content/docs/en/guides/on-demand-rendering.mdx

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Thank you @ArmandPhilippot these changes look great to me! I made one ins suggestion where I could, and pointed out the one where I couldn't. But happy with this!

I will say, for the changes to the "Features" sections, which is basically copied from the existing server-side-rendering page in main branch, you can feel free to PR them to that page directly too, and this will let the translators work on that updated content in advance of this branch merging eventually. That would make that merge more just "copy paste" of that entire Features section, which I really hadn't intended to change here!

Co-authored-by: Sarah Rainsberger <[email protected]>

ArmandPhilippot · 2024-10-16T13:16:29Z

Thanks for your feedback @sarah11918! I'm going to make a PR to update the current doc! 🫡

sarah11918 · 2024-10-16T13:17:48Z

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update a code snippet in guides/server-side-rendering.mdx #9700

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		```astro title="src/pages/my-product.astro" {10,11}
		```astro title="src/pages/product/[id].astro" {10,11}

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