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Barry Nits #3

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jimsch opened this issue Jun 30, 2019 · 1 comment
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Barry Nits #3

jimsch opened this issue Jun 30, 2019 · 1 comment

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jimsch commented Jun 30, 2019

  1. Nit: "a mechanism other that" should be "a mechanism other than".

  2. "and add to a second edition of the specification if warranted" ... presumably this is in the re-charter because it is warranted. I suggest removing "if warranted".

  3. "The body of existing specifications that make use of CDDL is considered
    precious": Awwwwwwwww... :-)

  4. "It is currently expected that this would be done using a Wiki of some type.
    This work would not be expected to be published by the IETF." Yayyyyy! Thanks.

  5. Nit: that are either currently adopted by the working group, by other working groups, or as individual submissions" is not a parallel list. Maybe, "that are currently adopted by the working group, are work items in other working groups, or exist as individual submissions." Also, I suggest removing the paragraph break between this paragraph and the next.

  6. Nit: "Internet wide specifications" needs a hyphen: "Internet-wide specifications".

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jimsch commented Jun 30, 2019

3 appears to be non-actionable
4. is just a comment and is not actionable

jimsch added a commit that referenced this issue Jul 1, 2019
* Deal with all of Barry's nits in #3
* Deal with first and third of Martin's Comments #8
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