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fixed some technical terms in the readme #50

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23 changes: 12 additions & 11 deletions README.md
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Expand Up @@ -17,8 +17,8 @@ There are two recommended ways of running the project:

### Running with Docker
Using Docker has the advantage of starting everything up automatically,
including certificate generation, tests and linting, as well as creating
both the SECC and EVCC.
including certificate generation, tests and linting, as well as spawning
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Either is fine in this context, I think -- @nikkigithub1 was there a specific reason to change "spawning" to "creating" in the first place?

both the SECC and EVCC containers.

Building and running the docker file:

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an IPv6 link-local address assigned.

For Docker, the `docker-compose.yml` was configured to create an `IPv6` network
called `ipv6_net`, which enables the containers to acquire a link-local address - this is required to establish an ISO 15118 communication. This configuration is fine if the user wants to test, in isolation, the EVCC and SECC, and allow ISO 15118
communication. This configuration works for both Linux and BSD systems.
called `ipv6_net`, which enables the containers to acquire a link-local address - this is required to establish an
ISO 15118 communication. This configuration is fine if the user wants to test, in isolation, the EVCC and SECC, and
allow ISO 15118 communication. This configuration works for both Linux and BSD systems.

However, the usage of an internal `ipv6_net` network, in Docker, does not allow the
host to reach link-local addresses. This would pose a problem, as it would require
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| MESSAGE_LOG_EXI | `False` | Whether or not to log the EXI Bytestream messages (only works if log level is set to DEBUG)


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I think this is fine -- American English is often the standard in a technical context.


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[^1]: https://www.iso.org/standard/55366.html
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