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Co-authored-by: Sarah Rainsberger <[email protected]>

.changeset/curvy-walls-kneel.md

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-Adds support for allowing integrations to refresh the content layer
+Adds a new function `refreshContent` to the `astro:server:setup` hook that allows integrations to refresh the content layer. This can be used, for example, to register a webhook endpoint during dev, or to open a socket to a CMS to listen for changes.
 
-This adds a new object to the `astro:server:setup` hook that allows integrations to refresh the content layer. This can be used for example to register a webhook endpoint during dev, or to open a socket to a CMS to listen for changes.
+By default, `refreshContent` will refresh all collections. You can optionally pass a `loaders` property, which is an array of loader names. If provided, only collections that use those loaders will be refreshed. For example, A CMS integration could use this property to only refresh its own collections.
 
-The hook is passed a function called `refreshContent` that can be called to refresh the content layer. It can optionally be passed a `loaders` property, which is an array of loader names. If provided, only collections that use those loaders will be refreshed. If not provided, all loaders will be refreshed. A CMS integration could use this to only refresh its own collections.
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-It can also pass a `context` object, which will be passed to the loaders. This can be used to pass arbitrary data, such as the webhook body or an event from the websocket.
+You can also pass a `context` object to the loaders. This can be used to pass arbitrary data, such as the webhook body, or an event from the websocket.
 
 ```ts
  {