Merge pull request #29 from wbcsd/updated-wording

feat: updated 6.3
wbcsd · Nov 9, 2023 · 9dae12d · 9dae12d
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diff --git a/spec/v2/index.bs b/spec/v2/index.bs
@@ -1546,11 +1546,11 @@ The following section briefly describes some of the additional functionality whi
 
 A [=host system=] requires a [=data recipient=] to first authenticate before successfully calling an Action (such as [=Action ListFootprints=] or [=Action Events=]). The [=data recipient=] MUST perform the <dfn>authentication flow</dfn>:
 
-1. [=data recipient=] attempting to authenticate through an [=AuthEndpoint=] retrieved via OpenId Connect ([[!OPENID-CONNECT]]), by
-    1. [=Data recipient=] retrieving and validating the [=OpenId Provider Configuration Document=] of the [=host system=] (see [[!OPENID-CONNECT]]), and then
+1. data recipient attempting to perform the OpenId Connect-based flow, by
+    1. retrieving and validating the [=OpenId Provider Configuration Document=] of the host system (see [[!OPENID-CONNECT]]), and then
     2. using as [=AuthEndpoint=] the value of the `token_endpoint` property of the [=OpenId Provider Configuration Document=]
-2. otherwise, [=data recipient=] using [=AuthHostname=]`/`[=AuthSubpath=]`/auth/token` as the [=AuthEndpoint=] in the next step.
-3. [=data recipient=] retrieving the [=access token=] from [=AuthEndpoint=] (see [[#api-action-auth-request]]).
+2. otherwise, data recipient using [=AuthHostname=]`/`[=AuthSubpath=]`/auth/token` as the [=AuthEndpoint=] in the next step.
+3. data recipient retrieving the [=access token=] from [=AuthEndpoint=] (see [[#api-action-auth-request]]).
 
 Note: The [=authentication flow=] is defined such that a Version 2.1 data recipient can authenticate against host versions irrespective of their support for OpenID-Connect.