Reflow intro to ch1 to avoid an orphan paragraph

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 In this chapter, you should summarize and reference a lot of existing literature and research.
 
 Striking the right balance in your literature review is crucial.
-While you need to thoroughly cover the relevant research in your area,
-you must also be selective in what you present to avoid boring the reader to death.
+While you need to thoroughly cover relevant research, you must be selective to maintain reader interest.
 As a rule of thumb, regard the reader as well-versed computer scientist who may not be specialized in your specific research area.
-This means you can assume familiarity with fundamental concepts covered in compulsory lectures, while dedicating more attention to field-specific concepts
-and specialized techniques that form the foundation of your research.
+This means you can assume familiarity with concepts from compulsory lectures,
+while focusing on field-specific knowledge and techniques essential to your research.
 
-In order to reference existing research, you should use the standard \emph{citations}\todo{Use \textbackslash{}emph command like this, to highlight the first occurrence of an important word or term. Reader will notice it, and hopefully remember the importance.}.
+Reference existing research using standard \emph{citations}\todo{Use \textbackslash{}emph command like this, to highlight the first occurrence of an important word or term. Reader will notice it, and hopefully remember the importance.}.