AK_LORIS_indepth #10

knoll-alex · 2019-10-30T18:48:19Z

Here is an updated reveal presentation for LORIS

christinerogers

note to selves: how to preview commit (prior to my review):
https://htmlpreview.github.io/?https://github.com/samirdas/samirdas.github.io/blob/bbd2e2ae1b5782bd8595cf95ac40a413d34bd4a8/LORIS_indepth.html#

Changes requested in line.
Generally, do apply the changes made in other presentations here.
In addition, I stopped adding comments on the last few lines.
one key slide in that last batch to update -- the one with Angelina Paolozza's quote :

fix typo - should be NeuroDevNet
put ", PhD student, " after her last name
There's also a last line missing from her quote: "We analyzed and published our results two years earlier than it would have taken without LORIS."

christinerogers · 2019-10-30T21:23:43Z

LORIS_indepth.html

@@ -216,63 +94,14 @@ <h4 align="center"><font color="f27c30">
                        </font></h4>
 			<h3 align="center"><a href="https://demo.loris.ca" target="_blank"><span class="fragment">TRY ME!</span></a></h3>


See my comments on the MNI Ecosystem slide deck for similar/identical slides
e.g. #9 (comment)

christinerogers · 2019-10-30T21:33:36Z

LORIS_indepth.html

+              <!-- What does LORIS do? Column 2 -->
+
+        <section>
+               <section>
 	    <h2>What does LORIS do?</h2>
 	    <img src="images/loris_purpose.jpg" style="border:0" width="80%"> 


replace this slide with hexagon tiles from google slides [link again here ]

create a second slide with Loris map and circles (N subjects, X visits...)

thanks, done

christinerogers · 2019-10-30T21:36:08Z

LORIS_indepth.html

+
+            <section>
+            <img src="images/LORIS_features.png">
+                 <p>Scroll down to see more key features of LORIS</p>


Reveal doesn't actually work with mouse scroll - you have to hit the arrow keys. Can we find a better word than "scroll" to clarify this?

good idea - we don't want to use click either in case someone is viewing on a touchscreen. Maybe "See more key LORIS features below"

christinerogers · 2019-10-30T21:37:05Z

LORIS_indepth.html

+        <section>
+
+            <section>
+            <img src="images/LORIS_features.png">


try to update this image with the 4th row shown the google slides [link here]

christinerogers · 2019-10-30T21:38:24Z

LORIS_indepth.html

+<!-- More Cool Features Column 6-->
+
+      <section>        
+         <section data-background="images/cat_cool.jpg">


christinerogers · 2019-10-30T21:41:44Z

LORIS_indepth.html

@@ -670,8 +402,213 @@ <h2>LORIS - Github <font color="yellow"> - Open Source</font></h2>
                        <h2>LORIS - Github<font color="yellow"> Usage</font></h2>


yellow -> orange if you can

done - changed all yellow in the code to loris orange

christinerogers · 2019-10-30T21:42:18Z

LORIS_indepth.html

@@ -670,8 +402,213 @@ <h2>LORIS - Github <font color="yellow"> - Open Source</font></h2>
                        <h2>LORIS - Github<font color="yellow"> Usage</font></h2>
                        <img src="images/github_usage2017.png">


could you find/update this from our github? would be great to show through 2019

good call, done

christinerogers · 2019-10-30T21:43:21Z

LORIS_indepth.html

+               </tr></table>
+     	</section>
+
+<!-- OMEGA - small pilot, interest has spiked  -->


remove...

Replace with Open MNI iEEG atlas

to do: @christinerogers to provide content

christinerogers · 2019-10-30T21:44:33Z

LORIS_indepth.html

+<!-- Requirements Column 9 -->	
+
+          <section>    
+              <section>
 			<h2>LORIS - <font color="yellow">Requirements</font></h2>
 			<p class="fragment grow">Dedicated developer! (software is free of charge)</p>		
 			<p class="fragment roll-in">LINUX based server</p>


3 lines below line 617 -- remove "beer for Samir"

Rename "Requirements for HBHL" to
"Scaling LORIS - Institutions and Consortia "

christinerogers · 2019-10-30T21:47:08Z

LORIS_indepth.html

@@ -697,7 +634,8 @@ <h2>LORIS - <font color="blue"> Links</font></h2>
 			<p>Source code: <a href="https://github.com/aces/Loris" target="_blank"> https://github.com/aces/Loris</a></p>


line above: put the actual loris-dev email address on a new line (it wraps awkwardly)

Cool - I added a break to each line to keep it consistent

christinerogers

I did another brief pass - the updates look pretty good!

i caught some sizing issues, and i also flagged a few further things (so, requesting changes)

christinerogers · 2019-10-31T17:10:43Z

LORIS_indepth.html

 	    <h2>What does LORIS do?</h2>
-	    <img src="images/loris_purpose.jpg" style="border:0" width="80%"> 
+	    <img src="images/LORIS_hexagons.png"> 


@knoll-alex could you enlarge the image so that it's at least 150% of current size? the words inside the hexagons need to be bigger to be readable

150% was too big - it doesn't fit on the page. I tried to make it as big as possible while still fitting on the page. let me know if it's ok?

@christinerogers ask Derek to make a bigger and transparent version (w/o orange squiggle

christinerogers · 2019-10-31T17:11:05Z

LORIS_indepth.html

+
+            <section>
+                <h3>LORIS Around the World!</h3>
+            <img src="images/LORIS_map.png">


likewise (^) bigger please

christinerogers · 2019-10-31T17:12:25Z

LORIS_indepth.html

+		  <span class="fragment"><h3 align="center"><a href="https://demo.loris.ca" target="_blank">Try the LORIS Demo</a></h3></span>
+		</td>
+		<td width="40%" style="vertical-align:middle">
+		  <img src="images/loris_arch.png" style="padding:0; margin:0;">


image is too small... is it because the text is now given enough space to avoid wrap?
can the left/right buffer on the slide be diminished instead?
it seems either the text or the image generally has to suffer with the wide margins we have currently

tried to change this! played around with the width of each column and the image is bigger now, although the text doesn't look as good...

christinerogers · 2019-10-31T17:14:53Z

LORIS_indepth.html

-
-		    <!-- LORIS core -->
+
+            <section data-background="images/Rogers_poster.PNG" data-background-size="70%">


@christinerogers we need a different screenshot here...

christinerogers · 2019-10-31T17:16:03Z

LORIS_indepth.html

-                        <h2>Login</h2>
-                        <a href="https://demo.loris.ca" target="_blank"><img src="images/LORIS_login.png"></a>
+                        <p>High-Level Walkthrough of LORIS</p>
+                    <p><small>...follow along!</small></p>


print the URL -:

Follow along at :
demo.loris.ca

christinerogers · 2019-10-31T17:16:23Z

LORIS_indepth.html

 		      <section>
-                        <h2>Login</h2>
-                        <a href="https://demo.loris.ca" target="_blank"><img src="images/LORIS_login.png"></a>
+                        <p>High-Level Walkthrough of LORIS</p>


needs to be a header font

done - I tried to avoid it sometimes since it defaults all letters to caps. not sure how to change that!

christinerogers · 2019-10-31T17:19:24Z

LORIS_indepth.html

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+            <section>
+                <h2><font color="12a3d8">LORIS-CBRAIN INTEGRATION</font></h2>
+		<p>Benefits <font color="f27c30">vs</font> Challenges</p>


take out "Benefits vs challenges" - makes sense in a talk but not in a slide deck

christinerogers

No files look like they're at risk of being deleted. if content is ok, mergable.

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		@@ -216,63 +94,14 @@ <h4 align="center"><font color="f27c30">
		</font></h4>
		<h3 align="center"><a href="https://demo.loris.ca" target="_blank"><span class="fragment">TRY ME!</span></a></h3>

		@@ -670,8 +402,213 @@ <h2>LORIS - Github <font color="yellow"> - Open Source</font></h2>
		<h2>LORIS - Github<font color="yellow"> Usage</font></h2>

		@@ -670,8 +402,213 @@ <h2>LORIS - Github <font color="yellow"> - Open Source</font></h2>
		<h2>LORIS - Github<font color="yellow"> Usage</font></h2>
		<img src="images/github_usage2017.png">

		@@ -697,7 +634,8 @@ <h2>LORIS - <font color="blue"> Links</font></h2>
		<p>Source code: <a href="https://github.com/aces/Loris" target="_blank"> https://github.com/aces/Loris</a></p>


		<!-- LORIS core -->

		<section data-background="images/Rogers_poster.PNG" data-background-size="70%">

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