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[U] Add Barron's words and modify some formulation #148

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  • 增加了巴伦的曾经留下的语句
  • 在尽可能遵循原意的情况下，优化了部分中英文表达
  • 修正了部分称呼错误
  • 对文中“少女终末旅行”的比喻英文部分进行了修正
  • 修正了部分语法错误

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[U] Add Barron's words and modify some formulation
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- 增加了巴伦的曾经留下的语句
- 在尽可能遵循原意的情况下，优化了部分中英文表达
- 修正了部分称呼错误
- 对文中“少女终末旅行”的比喻英文部分进行了修正
- 修正了部分语法错误
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解释一下修正部分：

  1. 巴伦于23.08.31发布的推文“好想希望长眠过后有人能记住我”
  2. 可能是由于情绪相关的原因，更新者的行文确实流畅度略微欠佳，此处进行了一定的语言段落调整。此外，根据One Among Us的纪念性质，优化了一部分英文表达，比如"quality time" "sugar dating"的替换
  3. 可能是由于情绪相关的原因，更新者的行文中错将部分“她”打成了“他”，而英文翻译亦使用了"his"，此处一并纠正
  4. 《少女终末旅行》有对应的电影"Girls' Last Tour"，在这里的英文一并遵从，但根据跨性别者的心路历程和生活历程艰辛的缘故，在后面保留了"journey"的用法，中文对应“旅途”。
  5. 英文行文中有部分语法错误，此处一并修正（未修正部分省略句）

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LS-KR commented Nov 24, 2023

辛苦了

@LS-KR LS-KR merged commit 4b6911c into one-among-us:main Nov 25, 2023
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