[F] fix Zha_Ke/page.en.md and prepare to translate the letter to English

one-among-us · Oct 12, 2023 · bd11a8f · bd11a8f
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-Zha Ke (Lilith) was a transgender man. We have few information of his life, despite a letter he left to the world. 
+Zha Ke (Lilith) was a transgender man. We have little information of him, only a letter he left to the world. 
 
-(Warning: Please be informed that the letter by Zha Ke is potentially triggering, including depiction of suicidal thoughts and mental health sufferings. The letter is in simplified Chinese.)
+(Warning: Please be informed that the letter by Zha Ke is potentially triggering, includes depiction of suicidal thoughts and mental health issues. The letter is in simplified Chinese and translated to English.)
 
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-He wrote, “the world abandoned me. And for me, I will eventually be fogotten by everyone.” However, we will remember him forever. We are grateful that the owner of [StarTransForEve](https://startransforeve.com/) provided his information for our rememberance. Zha Ke, we wish you rest in peace.
+He wrote, “The world abandoned me long ago. I will also eventually be forgotten by everyone.” However, we will remember him forever. We are grateful that the owner of [StarTransForEve](https://startransforeve.com/) provided his information for our rememberance.
+Rest in peace, Zha Ke