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docs/pages/blog/siriwat-kunaporn-joining.md

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 Before joining Material-UI, Jun worked as a software engineer at ThoughtWorks.
 He has spent the last three years as a full-stack engineer, focusing more on React and the implementation of great-looking UIs. Jun is passionate about creating UIs that feel amazing.
 
-We were impressed by his previous work on exploring the customization potential of Material-UI in [MUI Treasury](https://mui-treasury.com/). He's has demonstrated his care of the details and interest in design.
+We were impressed by his previous work on exploring the customization potential of Material-UI in [MUI Treasury](https://mui-treasury.com/).
+He's has demonstrated his care of the details and interest in design.
 
-While we can't predict the future, Jun will initially help us get Material-UI v5 down the finish line. Then, he will be focusing almost exclusively on pushing Material-UI further in the design realm. We might start with a [second theme](https://github.com/mui-org/material-ui/issues/22485), a rebranding, a revamp of the documentation or the implementation of ["blocks"](https://deploy-preview-16--material-ui-blocks.netlify.app/).
+While we can't predict the future, Jun will initially help us get Material-UI v5 down the finish line.
+Then, he will be focusing almost exclusively on pushing Material-UI further in the design realm.
+We might start with a [second theme](https://github.com/mui-org/material-ui/issues/22485), a rebranding, a revamp of the documentation or the implementation of ["blocks"](https://deploy-preview-16--material-ui-blocks.netlify.app/).
 
 Jun is the second of a series of 5 new positions we have recently opened and filled.
 We will cross the 10 person milestone in the coming weeks.