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update doc for BoundServiceAccountTokenVolume and RootCAConfigMap #27082

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/assign @PI-Victor
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/lgtm

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Hi @zshihang

Thanks for this PR. We'd like some changes which I've detailed some in the review summary and some inline.

https://kubernetes.io/docs/reference/access-authn-authz/service-accounts-admin/#bound-service-account-token-volume also needs updating to revise:

This feature depends on the RootCAConfigMap feature gate enabled which publish a "kube-root-ca.crt" ConfigMap to every namespace.

content/en/docs/reference/access-authn-authz/service-accounts-admin.md Outdated
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ It acts synchronously to modify pods as they are created or updated. When this p
1. It adds a `volumeSource` to each container of the pod mounted at `/var/run/secrets/kubernetes.io/serviceaccount`.

#### Bound Service Account Token Volume
{{< feature-state for_k8s_version="v1.13" state="alpha" >}}
{{< feature-state for_k8s_version="v1.21" state="beta" >}}

When the `BoundServiceAccountTokenVolume` feature gate is enabled, the service account admission controller will
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We're a bit more strict about beta docs, so I recommend:

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When the `BoundServiceAccountTokenVolume` feature gate is enabled, the service account admission controller will
When the `BoundServiceAccountTokenVolume` [feature gate](/docs/reference/command-line-tools-reference/feature-gates/)
is enabled, the service account admission controller will

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done

content/en/docs/reference/command-line-tools-reference/feature-gates.md
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| `RootCAConfigMap` | `false` | Alpha | 1.13 | 1.19 |
| `RootCAConfigMap` | `true` | Beta | 1.20 | 1.20 |
| `RootCAConfigMap` | `true` | GA | 1.21 | - |
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Remember to remove this feature gate from the previous table (it's not yet automated, sorry).

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done

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sftim commented Mar 16, 2021

Because this does need a couple of updates, I'll note the tech review from SIG Auth (thanks @liggitt) but
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Hi @zshihang , thank you for having your Doc PR ready for review, friendly reminder about the upcoming doc related dates for the 1.21 release:
Upcoming doc related dates for the 1.21 release:

  • Docs Ready for Review deadline is March 24
  • Docs Ready to Merge deadline is March 31

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Hi @zshihang, please review @sftim's comments and requested changes
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Review was indeed stale

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| `RemoveSelfLink` | `false` | Alpha | 1.16 | 1.19 |
| `RemoveSelfLink` | `true` | Beta | 1.20 | |
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Why is RemoveSelfLink removed here? The PR description does not explain this amendment.

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oops, done

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tengqm commented Mar 26, 2021

We have got tech LGTM with doc review feedbacks addressed.
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