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Co-authored-by: Harry <[email protected]>

site-src/v1alpha2/guides/tcp.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ distribute the traffic with the following rules:
   `my-bar-service` Kubernetes Service.
 
 In this example two `TCP` listeners will be applied to the [Gateway][gateway]
-in order to route them to two separate backend `TCPRoutes`, note that the
+in order to route them to two separate `TCPRoute` resources. Note how the
 `protocol` set for the `listeners` on the `Gateway` is `TCP`:
 
 ```
@@ -39,9 +39,9 @@ This corresponds directly with the `name` in the `listeners` in the `Gateway`:
     port: 8090
 ```
 
-In this way each `TCPRoute` "attaches" itself to a different port on the
+In this way each `TCPRoute` "attaches" itself to a port on the
 `Gateway` so that the service `my-foo-service` is taking traffic for port `8080`
-from outside the cluster and `my-bar-service` takes the port `8090` traffic.
+and `my-bar-service` takes the port `8090` traffic.
 
 ## Alternatives: TCP Traffic Routing Using Metadata