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content/docs/sidebar.json

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           }
         ]
       },
-      {
-        "label": "Sharing Data and Model Files",
-        "slug": "sharing-data-and-model-files"
-      },
+      "sharing-data-and-model-files",
       {
         "label": "CI/CD for Machine Learning",
         "slug": "ci-cd-for-machine-learning"

content/docs/use-cases/sharing-data-and-model-files.md

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 # Sharing Data and Model Files
 
-Like Git, DVC allows for a distributed environment and collaboration. We make it
-easy to consistently get all your data files and directories into any machine,
-along with matching source code. All you need to do is to setup
-[remote storage](/doc/command-reference/remote) for your <abbr>DVC
-project</abbr>, and push the data there, so others can reach it. Currently DVC
-supports Amazon S3, Microsoft Azure Blob Storage, Google Drive, Google Cloud
-Storage, SSH, HDFS, and other remote locations. The list is constantly growing.
-(For a complete list and configuration instructions, refer to `dvc remote add`.)
-
-![](/img/model-sharing-digram.png) _Data is stored in storage you control,
-separate from code._
+Like Git, DVC allows for a distributed environment and collaboration. It makes
+it easy to consistently get all your data files and directories into any
+machine, along with matching source code.
+
+You setup your own [remote storage](/doc/command-reference/remote), and push the
+data there, so others can pull it later. DVC supports Amazon S3, Microsoft Azure
+Blob Storage, Google Drive, Google Cloud Storage, SSH, HDFS, and other
+providers. The list is constantly growing!
+
+![](/img/model-sharing-digram.png) _Data lives in storage you control, separate
+from code._
 
 As an example, let's take a look at how you could setup an S3
 [remote storage](/doc/command-reference/remote) for a <abbr>DVC project</abbr>,