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README.md

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ Malcolm is a powerful network traffic analysis tool suite designed with the foll
 * **Permissive license** – Malcolm is comprised of several widely used open source tools, making it an attractive alternative to security solutions requiring paid licenses.
 * **Expanding control systems visibility** – While Malcolm is great for general-purpose network traffic analysis, its creators see a particular need in the community for tools providing insight into protocols used in industrial control systems (ICS) environments. Ongoing Malcolm development will aim to provide additional parsers for common ICS protocols.
 
-Although all of the open source tools which make up Malcolm are already available and in general use, Malcolm provides a framework of interconnectivity which makes it greater than the sum of its parts. And while there are many other network traffic analysis solutions out there, ranging from complete Linux distributions like Security Onion to licensed products like Splunk Enterprise Security, the creators of Malcolm feel its easy deployment and robust combination of tools fill a void in the network security space that will make network traffic analysis accessible to many in both the public and private sectors as well as individual enthusiasts.
+Although all of the open source tools which make up Malcolm are already available and in general use, Malcolm provides a framework of interconnectivity which makes it greater than the sum of its parts.
 
 In short, Malcolm provides an easily deployable network analysis tool suite for full packet capture artifacts (PCAP files) and Zeek logs. While Internet access is required to build it, it is not required at runtime.
 

docs/dashboards.md

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 Malcolm comes with dozens of prebuilt visualizations and dashboards for the network traffic represented by each of the Zeek log types. Click **Dashboard** to see a list of these dashboards. As is the case with all OpenSearch Dashboards visualizations, all of the charts, graphs, maps, and tables are interactive and can be clicked on to narrow or expand the scope of the data you are investigating. Similarly, click **Visualize** to explore the prebuilt visualizations used to build the dashboards.
 
-Many of Malcolm's prebuilt visualizations for Zeek logs were originally inspired by the excellent [Kibana Dashboards](https://github.com/Security-Onion-Solutions/securityonion-elastic/tree/master/kibana/dashboards) that are part of [Security Onion](https://securityonion.net/).
+Inspiration for many of Malcolm's prebuilt visualizations for Zeek logs was originally drawn from [Security Onion](https://github.com/Security-Onion-Solutions/securityonion)'s excellent Kibana dashboards.
 
 #### <a name="PrebuiltVisualizationsGallery"></a>Screenshots