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diff --git a/docs/details/shards/GFX/Render.md b/docs/details/shards/GFX/Render.md
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ This function should be used only once per rendered frame.
 It takes a [View](../View) or sequence of [Views](../View) that represent the main camera as a parameter.
 
 ??? info Default view
-    If neither `:View` nor `:Views` is specified the renderer will use a default view with both identity view and projection matrices.
+    If neither `:View` nor `:Views` is specified, the renderer will use a default view with both identity view and projection matrices.
 
 The `:Steps` parameter contains the list of rendering operations to perform, this can be sequence objects created by one of the following:
 
@@ -13,4 +13,4 @@ The `:Steps` parameter contains the list of rendering operations to perform, thi
 
 ## Default queue
 
-If no render queue is specified, this command reads from a global default queue
+If no render queue is specified, this command reads from a global default queue.
diff --git a/docs/details/shards/GFX/UIPass.md b/docs/details/shards/GFX/UIPass.md
@@ -1,3 +1,3 @@
-This defines a render step for rendering [UI](../../General/UI)
+Defines a render step for rendering [UI](../../General/UI).
 
 Check the examples on some of the UI shards for how to use this step, for example [UI.Label](../../UI/Label)
diff --git a/docs/details/shards/GFX/glTF.md b/docs/details/shards/GFX/glTF.md
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
-Loads a glTF model from a file. Outputs a `GFX.DrawableHierarchy` that can be passed to [Draw](../Draw)
+Loads a glTF model from a file. Outputs a `GFX.DrawableHierarchy` that can be passed to [Draw](../Draw).
 
 --8<-- "includes/drawable_refactor.md"
 
 ## Static file
 
-Loaded when the wire containing it is warmed up
+Loaded when the Wire containing it is warmed up.
 
 ```clojure
 {:Transform ...} (GFX.glTF :Path "pathToModel.glb") >= .drawable
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ Loaded when the wire containing it is warmed up
 ## Dynamic file
 
 Loaded when activated.
-You should cache results inside `(Setup ...)` shard
+You should cache the result inside a [Setup](../../General/Once) shard.
 
 ```clojure
 {:Transform ... :Path .path} (GFX.glTF) >= .drawable
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ You should cache results inside `(Setup ...)` shard
 ## Raw bytes
 
 Loaded when activated.
-You should cache results inside `(Setup ...)` shard
+You should cache the result inside a [Setup](../../General/Once) shard.
 
 ```clojure
 {:Transform ... :Bytes .gltf-data} (GFX.glTF) >= .drawable

diff --git a/docs/docs/reference/shards/GFX/index.md b/docs/docs/reference/shards/GFX/index.md
@@ -2,4 +2,4 @@
 
 Here you'll find all the shards related to graphics and rendering.
 
-For a basic example, check the [GFX.Render](./Render) shard documentation
+For a basic example, check out the [GFX.Render](./Render) shard documentation.
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		Here you'll find all the shards related to graphics and rendering.

		For a basic example, check the [GFX.Render](./Render) shard documentation
		For a basic example, check out the [GFX.Render](./Render) shard documentation.