improve the text in the mac installer

elm · Oct 14, 2019 · 2edbe13 · 2edbe13
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diff --git a/installers/mac/Distribution.xml b/installers/mac/Distribution.xml
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8" standalone="no"?>
 <installer-script minSpecVersion="1.000000" authoringTool="com.apple.PackageMaker" authoringToolVersion="3.0.6" authoringToolBuild="201">
-    <title>Elm Platform</title>
+    <title>Elm</title>
     <options customize="allow" allow-external-scripts="no"/>
     <domains enable_localSystem="true"/>
     <volume-check script="pm_volume_check();"/>
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 function pm_volume_check() {
   if(!(my.target.systemVersion &amp;&amp; /* >= */ system.compareVersions(my.target.systemVersion.ProductVersion, '10.6.0') >= 0)) {
     my.result.title = 'Failure';
-    my.result.message = 'This version of Elm Platform requires Mac OS X 10.6 or later.';
+    my.result.message = 'This version of Elm requires Mac OS X 10.6 or later.';
     my.result.type = 'Fatal';
     return false;
   }
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ function pm_volume_check() {
     <choices-outline>
         <line choice="choice2"/>
     </choices-outline>
-    <choice id="choice2" title="Elm Platform ">
+    <choice id="choice2" title="Elm">
         <pkg-ref id="org.elm-lang.binaries.pkg"/>
     </choice>
     <pkg-ref id="org.elm-lang.binaries.pkg" installKBytes="19444" version="1" auth="Root">binaries.pkg</pkg-ref>

diff --git a/installers/mac/Resources/en.lproj/conclusion.rtf b/installers/mac/Resources/en.lproj/conclusion.rtf
@@ -1,9 +1,16 @@
-{\rtf1\ansi\ansicpg1252\cocoartf1187\cocoasubrtf400
-{\fonttbl\f0\fswiss\fcharset0 Helvetica;}
+{\rtf1\ansi\ansicpg1252\cocoartf2509
+\cocoatextscaling0\cocoaplatform0{\fonttbl\f0\fswiss\fcharset0 Helvetica;\f1\fmodern\fcharset0 CourierNewPSMT;}
 {\colortbl;\red255\green255\blue255;}
-\paperw11900\paperh16840\margl1440\margr1440\vieww10800\viewh8400\viewkind0
-\pard\tx566\tx1133\tx1700\tx2267\tx2834\tx3401\tx3968\tx4535\tx5102\tx5669\tx6236\tx6803\pardirnatural
+{\*\expandedcolortbl;;}
+\paperw11900\paperh16840\margl1440\margr1440\vieww11180\viewh8400\viewkind0
+\pard\tx720\tx1440\tx2160\tx2880\tx3600\tx4320\tx5040\tx5760\tx6480\tx7200\tx7920\tx8640\pardirnatural\partightenfactor0
 
-\f0\fs26 \cf0 A bunch of useful programs were just placed in /usr/local/bin/\
+\f0\fs28 \cf0 Try opening the terminal and running commands like:\
 \
-Check out {\field{\*\fldinst HYPERLINK "http://elm-lang.org/Get-Started.elm"}{\fldrslt this tutorial}} to learn how to use them!}
+
+\f1 elm init\
+elm make src/Main.elm --optimize\
+elm repl
+\f0 \
+\
+Check out {\field{\*\fldinst{HYPERLINK "https://guide.elm-lang.org/"}}{\fldrslt this tutorial}} for more advice!}
diff --git a/installers/mac/Resources/en.lproj/welcome.rtf b/installers/mac/Resources/en.lproj/welcome.rtf
@@ -1,7 +1,12 @@
-{\rtf1\ansi\ansicpg1252\cocoartf1187\cocoasubrtf400
-{\fonttbl\f0\fswiss\fcharset0 Helvetica;}
+{\rtf1\ansi\ansicpg1252\cocoartf2509
+\cocoatextscaling0\cocoaplatform0{\fonttbl\f0\fswiss\fcharset0 Helvetica;\f1\fmodern\fcharset0 CourierNewPSMT;}
 {\colortbl;\red255\green255\blue255;}
+{\*\expandedcolortbl;;}
 \paperw11900\paperh16840\margl1440\margr1440\vieww10800\viewh8400\viewkind0
-\pard\tx566\tx1133\tx1700\tx2267\tx2834\tx3401\tx3968\tx4535\tx5102\tx5669\tx6236\tx6803\pardirnatural
+\pard\tx566\tx1133\tx1700\tx2267\tx2834\tx3401\tx3968\tx4535\tx5102\tx5669\tx6236\tx6803\pardirnatural\partightenfactor0
 
-\f0\fs28 \cf0 This package will install Elm on your machine.}
+\f0\fs28 \cf0 Thank you for trying out Elm!\
+\
+This installer makes 
+\f1 elm
+\f0  available in your terminal.}