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src-docs/src/views/tables/in_memory/in_memory_selection_section.js

@@ -22,8 +22,7 @@ export const selectionSection = {
       </p>
       <p>
         For uncontrolled usage, where selection changes are determined entirely
-        by the user, you can set items to be selected initially by passing an
-        array of items to an array of items to{' '}
+        to be selected initially by passing an array of items to{' '}
         <EuiCode>selection.initialSelected</EuiCode>. You can also use{' '}
         <EuiCode>selected.onSelectionChange</EuiCode> to track or respond to the
         items that users select.
@@ -32,7 +31,7 @@ export const selectionSection = {
         To completely control table selection, use{' '}
         <EuiCode>selection.selected</EuiCode> instead (which requires passing{' '}
         <EuiCode>selected.onSelectionChange</EuiCode>). This can be useful if
-        you want to handle selection in table based on user interaction with
+        you want to handle table selections based on user interaction with
         another part of the UI.
       </p>
     </>

src-docs/src/views/tables/selection/selection_section.js

@@ -66,16 +66,16 @@ export const section = {
         The following example shows how to configure selection via the{' '}
         <EuiCode>selection</EuiCode> property. For uncontrolled usage, where
         selection changes are determined entirely by the user, you can set items
-        to be selected initially by passing an array of items to an array of
-        items to <EuiCode>selection.initialSelected</EuiCode>. You can also use{' '}
+        to be selected initially by passing an array of items to{' '}
+        <EuiCode>selection.initialSelected</EuiCode>. You can also use{' '}
         <EuiCode>selected.onSelectionChange</EuiCode> to track or respond to the
         items that users select.
       </p>
       <p>
         To completely control table selection, use{' '}
         <EuiCode>selection.selected</EuiCode> instead (which requires passing{' '}
         <EuiCode>selected.onSelectionChange</EuiCode>). This can be useful if
-        you want to handle selection in table based on user interaction with
+        you want to handle table selections based on user interaction with
         another part of the UI.
       </p>
     </>