feat(academy): correct grammar and add link #437
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WalkthroughThe recent updates refine descriptions of decentralized identity and verifiable claims, emphasizing user control, inclusivity, and clarity. These changes align with W3C standards, promote gender neutrality, and enhance readability while highlighting the benefits of decentralized identity and verifiable claims. Changes
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docs/academy/part-2/verifiable-claims.mdx (4)
- 20-20: The update to use gender-neutral pronouns ("his" to "their") is a positive change for inclusivity and aligns with modern writing standards.
- 34-34: The addition of definitions for "verifiable credential" and "verifiable presentation" enhances the document's clarity, providing readers with a better understanding of these concepts.
- 50-50: The detailed explanation of the use case for a digital passport, including the roles of the passport holder and customs officers, effectively illustrates the practical application of verifiable credentials and presentations.
- 82-82: The changes made to the section on self-sovereign governance principles, specifically the clarification around the issuance and revocation of claims, improve the document's clarity and help readers understand the autonomy and control provided by decentralized systems.
docs/academy/part-2/decentralized-identity.mdx (7)
- 12-12: The introduction of decentralized identity and its advantages, such as enhanced security, privacy, and user-centricity, is well-articulated, providing a strong foundation for readers new to the concept.
- 22-26: The addition of an admonition with links to W3C standards documents on Decentralized Identifiers and Verifiable Credentials is a valuable resource for readers seeking to deepen their understanding of these standards.
- 70-70: Updating the pronoun to "their" in the description of the graduate's actions with the digital diploma improves the document's inclusivity.
- 98-98: The explanation of DIDs and their management via decentralized networks, along with the benefits of using multiple DIDs, is clear and informative, enhancing the reader's understanding of the flexibility and security offered by decentralized identity systems.
- 108-108: The example of an autonomous vehicle as a DID holder creatively illustrates the potential applications of decentralized identity beyond human identities, expanding the reader's perspective on the technology's versatility.
- 183-183: Providing a tool for DID resolution is a practical addition that can help readers explore DIDs further, making the documentation more interactive and engaging.
- 190-190: The overview of the did:key method, including its simplicity, instantaneous resolution, and support for multiple cryptographic algorithms, is concise and informative. However, highlighting its limitations regarding dynamic updates and privacy could further enhance reader understanding.
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This PR aims to :
add an admonition to give informations about W3C and provide link for Verifiable Credential doc and Decentralized Identifier doc
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