docs: more fixes

docs/framework/react/guide/deferred-data-loading.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ TanStack Router is designed to run loaders in parallel and wait for all of them
 
 Deferred data loading is a pattern that allows the router to render the next location's critical data/markup while slower, non-critical route data is resolved in the background. This process works on both the client and server (via streaming) and is a great way to improve the perceived performance of your application.
 
-If you are using a library like [TanStack Query](https://react-query.tanstack.com) or any other data fetching library, thn deferred data loading works a bit differently. Skip ahead to the [Deferred Data Loading with External Libraries](#deferred-data-loading-with-external-libraries) section for more information.
+If you are using a library like [TanStack Query](https://react-query.tanstack.com) or any other data fetching library, then deferred data loading works a bit differently. Skip ahead to the [Deferred Data Loading with External Libraries](#deferred-data-loading-with-external-libraries) section for more information.
 
 ## Deferred Data Loading with `defer` and `Await`
 
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ import { createFileRoute, defer } from '@tanstack/react-router'
 
 export const Route = createFileRoute('/posts/$postId')({
   loader: async () => {
-    // Kick off the fetching for some slower data, but do not await it
+    // Fetch some slower data, but do not await it
     const slowDataPromise = fetchSlowData()
 
     // Fetch and await some data that resolves quickly
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ import { slowDataOptions, fastDataOptions } from '~/api/query-options'
 
 export const Route = createFileRoute('/posts/$postId')({
   loader: async ({ context: { queryClient } }) => {
-    // Fetch some slower data, but do not await it
+    // Kick off the fetching of some slower data, but do not await it
     queryClient.prefetchQuery(slowDataOptions())
 
     // Fetch and await some data that resolves quickly