Merge pull request #27 from QuantumPhysique/rewrite_app_presentation

Rewrite app presentation

README.md

@@ -23,12 +23,13 @@ Preferably use F-Droid. \
 The [latest release](https://github.com/QuantumPhysique/trale/releases/latest) can also be downloaded here.
 
 ## Why trale 🐺?
-- Truly **gratis**: No annoying advertising no permission
+- Truly **gratis**: No annoying advertising, no tracker
 - Modern appearance using **Material Design 3**
 - **Customizable**: Many custom themes, **dark mode**, and several **units**
 - Track your **progress** with state-of-the-art data modeling 🧑‍💻
 - Import and export of your measurements
-- **Privacy**: Not just empty promises, it is fully <a href="https://github.com/comradekingu/trale/blob/main/LICENSE">copylefted libre software</a>
+- **Privacy**: No permissions and we do not collect any data
+- **<a href="https://github.com/comradekingu/trale/blob/main/LICENSE">Copylefted libre software</a>**: Our words are not just empty promises
 
 ## Upcoming features 🚀
 - [ ] Achievements and motivational messages
@@ -46,17 +47,17 @@ The [latest release](https://github.com/QuantumPhysique/trale/releases/latest) c
 ##### I found a bug
 Please open a new <a href="https://github.com/QuantumPhysique/trale/issues">issue</a>.
 
-##### Will this app stay gratis
-This app will always be gratis on F-Droid with all features. \
-Once leaving beta, a small fee will be added on the Google Play store.
+##### Will this app stay gratis?
+This app will always be gratis on F-Droid with all features.
+Once leaving beta, a small fee will be added on the Google Play Store.
 
-##### Could you please add feature X
-At this stage we focus on improving stability before new features. \
+##### Could you please add feature X?
+At this stage we are focusing on improving stability before adding new features.
 Feel free to open a new <a href="https://github.com/QuantumPhysique/trale/issues">issue</a> or a pull request.
 
-##### Can I contribute
+##### Can I contribute?
 - Implementing new functionality. If you are new to Flutter you should first [get started](https://flutter.dev/docs/get-started/install).
-- Open issues and help us find bugs, or simply give feedback.
+- Open an issue and help us find bugs, or just give us some feedback.
 - Share the app with your friends :)
 
 You can help [translate trale on Hosted Weblate](https://hosted.weblate.org/engage/trale/).
@@ -66,16 +67,12 @@ You can help [translate trale on Hosted Weblate](https://hosted.weblate.org/enga
 </a>
 
 ## Disclaimer
-Anorexia is a serious disease. \
-Especially due to the many negative examples in social media, \
-anorexia is increasingly a problem for society as a whole. \
-In order to make our contribution to prevention, \
-no target weight below 50 kg / 110 lb / 7.9 st is possible.
-
-This app is still in <b>beta</b> stage and may contain bugs. \
-It should work best with FHD/FHD+ resolution. \
-If you encounter a bug or if you are missing a feature, \
-please <a href="https://github.com/QuantumPhysique/trale/issues">open a new issue</a>.
+Anorexia is a serious disease.
+Especially due to the many negative examples on social media, anorexia is increasingly becoming a problem for society as a whole.
+As part of our contribution to prevention, no target weight below 50 kg / 110 lb / 7.9 st is possible.
+
+This app is still in <b>beta</b> stage and may contain bugs.
+If you encounter a bug or if you are missing a feature, please <a href="https://github.com/QuantumPhysique/trale/issues">open a new issue</a>.
 
 ## License
 The project is licensed [GNU AGPLv3+](https://github.com/comradekingu/trale/blob/main/LICENSE).

fastlane/metadata/android/de/full_description.txt

@@ -1,21 +1,20 @@
 Erreiche Dein optimales Gewicht mit Hilfe dieser schlichten App im Material Design.
 
-## Wieso trale 🐺?
+<b> Wieso trale 🐺?</b>
 * Komplett <b>kostenlos</b>: Keine nervige Werbung, keine Tracker
 * Modernes Design basierend auf <b>Material Design 3</b>
 * <b>Anpassbar</b>: Viele Farbthemen, <b>Dark Mode</b>, und verschiedene <b>Gewichtseinheiten</b>
 * Verfolge deinen Fortschritt mit <b>state-of-the-art</b> Datenmodellierung 🧑‍💻
 * Import und Export der Messwerte möglich
-* <b>Privatsphäre</b>: Nicht nur leere Versprechen, die App ist <a href="https://github.com/comradekingu/trale/blob/main/LICENSE">open-source</a>
+* <b>Privatsphäre</b>: Keine Berechtigungen und wir sammeln keinerlei Daten
+* <b><a href="https://github.com/comradekingu/trale/blob/main/LICENSE">Open-source</a></b>: Unsere Worte sind nicht nur leere Versprechen
 
-<b>Zukünftige Funktionen 🚀:</b>
+<b>Zukünftige Funktionen 🚀</b>
 * Errungenschaften und motivierende Nachrichten
 
 Werde noch heute Teil unserer Community! 🐺🤸‍♀️🏋‍♀️🧘‍♂️🏆🥇
 
-<b>Disclaimer</b>
-Magersucht ist eine ernste Krankheit. Insbesondere durch die vielen Negativbeispiele in den sozialen Medien wird Magersucht zunehmend zu einem gesamtgesellschaftlichen Problem. Um unseren Beitrag zur Prävention zu leisten, ist keine Zielgewichteingabe unter 50 kg / 110 lb / 7,9 st möglich.
+<b>Disclaimer ⚠️</b>
+Magersucht ist eine ernstzunehmende Krankheit. Insbesondere durch die vielen Negativbeispiele in den sozialen Medien wird Magersucht zunehmend zu einem gesamtgesellschaftlichen Problem. Um unseren Beitrag zur Prävention zu leisten, ist daher keine Zielgewichteingabe unter 50 kg / 110 lb / 7,9 st möglich.
 
-Diese App befindet sich noch im <b>beta</b> Stadium und kann Fehler enthalten. 
-Sie sollte am besten mit einer FHD/FHD+ Auflösung funktionieren. 
-Falls Du einen Fehler findest oder eine Funktion vermisst, bitte <a href="https://github.com/quantumphysique/trale/issues">eröffne ein neues Issue</a>.
+Diese App befindet sich noch im <b>beta</b> Stadium und kann Fehler enthalten. Falls Du einen Fehler findest oder eine Funktion vermisst, bitte <a href="https://github.com/quantumphysique/trale/issues">eröffne ein neues Issue</a>.

fastlane/metadata/android/en-US/full_description.txt

@@ -1,26 +1,21 @@
 Lock in your optimal weight by losing or gaining with this simple, material design app.
 
-## Why trale 🐺?
-* Truly <b>gratis</b>: No annoying advertising no permission
+<b>Why trale 🐺?</b>
+* Truly <b>gratis</b>: No annoying advertising, no tracker
 * Modern appearance using <b>Material Design 3</b>
 * <b>Customizable</b>: Many custom themes, <b>dark mode</b>, and several <b>units</b>
 * Track your <b>progress</b> with state-of-the-art data modeling 🧑‍💻
 * Import and export of your measurements
-* <b>Privacy</b>: Not just empty promises, it is fully <a href="https://github.com/comradekingu/trale/blob/main/LICENSE">copylefted libre software</a>
+* <b>Privacy</b>: No permissions and we do not collect any data
+* <b><a href="https://github.com/comradekingu/trale/blob/main/LICENSE">Copylefted libre software</a></b>: Our words are not just empty promises
 
 
-<b>Upcoming features 🚀:</b>
+<b>Upcoming features 🚀</b>
 * Achievements and motivational messages
 
 Join our community today! 🐺🤸‍♀️🏋‍♀️🧘‍♂️🏆🥇
 
-<b>Disclaimer</b>
-Anorexia is a serious disease. 
-Especially due to the many negative examples in social media, 
-anorexia is increasingly a problem for society as a whole. 
-In order to make our contribution to prevention, 
-no target weight below 50 kg / 110 lb / 7.9 st is possible.
+<b>Disclaimer ⚠️</b>
+Anorexia is a serious disease. Especially due to the many negative examples on social media, anorexia is increasingly becoming a problem for society as a whole. As part of our contribution to prevention, no target weight below 50 kg / 110 lb / 7.9 st is possible.
 
-This app is still in <b>beta</b> stage and may contain bugs.
-It should work best with FHD/FHD+ resolution.
-<a href="https://github.com/quantumphysique/trale/issues">Open a new issue</a> to report bugs or request features.
+This app is still in <b>beta</b> stage and may contain bugs. <a href="https://github.com/quantumphysique/trale/issues">Open a new issue</a> to report bugs or request features.