grammar fixes

docs/narr/project.rst

@@ -317,8 +317,8 @@ the case, if you use a browser running on the same system as Pyramid, it will
 be able to access the application via ``http://127.0.0.1:6543/`` as well as via
 ``http://192.168.1.50:6543/``. However, *other people* on other computers on
 the same network will also be able to visit your Pyramid application in their
-browser by visiting ``http://192.168.1.50:6543/``. Same holds true if you use
-ipv6. ``[::]`` means the same as ``0.0.0.0`` but for ipv6 protocol.
+browser by visiting ``http://192.168.1.50:6543/``. The same holds true if you use
+IPv6. ``[::]`` means the same as ``0.0.0.0`` but for IPv6 protocol.
 
 You can change the port on which the server runs on by changing the same
 portion of the ``development.ini`` file.  For example, you can change the

docs/narr/startup.rst

@@ -131,11 +131,10 @@ Here's a high-level time-ordered overview of what happens when you press
 
 #. ``pserve`` starts the WSGI *server* defined within the ``[server:main]``
    section.  In our case, this is the Waitress server (``use =
-   egg:waitress#main``), and it will listen on all interfaces (``listen =
-   127.0.0.1:6543 [::1]:6543``, means that it will listen on ipv4 and ipv6),
-   on port number 6543. The server code itself
-   is what prints ``serving on http://127.0.0.1:6543``. The server serves the
-   application, and the application is running, waiting to receive requests.
+   egg:waitress#main``), and it will listen on all interfaces on port 6543
+   for both IPv4 and IPv6 (``listen = 127.0.0.1:6543 [::1]:6543``). The server
+   code itself is what prints ``serving on http://127.0.0.1:6543``. The server
+   serves the application, and the application is running, waiting to receive requests.
 
 .. seealso::
    Logging configuration is described in the :ref:`logging_chapter` chapter.