more typo fixes (CleverRaven#62675)

* typo fixes * Apply suggestions from code review Co-authored-by: NetSysFire <[email protected]> * Apply suggestions from code review Co-authored-by: Maleclypse <[email protected]> * Apply suggestions from code review Co-authored-by: Maleclypse <[email protected]> * Apply suggestions from code review Co-authored-by: Maleclypse <[email protected]> Co-authored-by: casswedson <[email protected]> Co-authored-by: NetSysFire <[email protected]> Co-authored-by: Maleclypse <[email protected]>
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diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/attunements/Stormcaller.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/attunements/Stormcaller.json
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
     "id": "electric_turret",
     "type": "SPELL",
     "name": { "str": "Thunder Pillar" },
-    "description": "Summon an immovable pillars, that will attack your enemies with devastating lightnings.",
+    "description": "Summon immovable pillars, that will attack your enemies with devastating lightning bolts.",
     "valid_targets": [ "ground" ],
     "flags": [ "SOMATIC", "VERBAL", "CONCENTRATE", "RANDOM_TARGET" ],
     "effect": "summon",

diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/biomancer.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/biomancer.json
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@
     "id": "biomancer_visceral_projection",
     "type": "SPELL",
     "name": "Visceral Projection",
-    "description": "Projects a spray of acrid blood and gore all around you, growing to ensnare your prey in in a field of twitching poisonous tendrils.",
+    "description": "Projects a spray of acrid blood and gore all around you, growing to ensnare your prey in a field of twitching poisonous tendrils.",
     "valid_targets": [ "ally", "hostile", "ground" ],
     "effect": "attack",
     "effect_str": "badpoison",

diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/black_dragon.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/black_dragon.json
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@
     "id": "dragon_spit_acid",
     "type": "SPELL",
     "name": "Dragon Acid Spit",
-    "description": "You conjur up acidic spittle that you can shoot long distances as you close on your terrified prey.",
+    "description": "You conjure up acidic spittle that you can shoot long distances as you close in on your terrified prey.",
     "valid_targets": [ "hostile" ],
     "flags": [ "LOUD", "VERBAL", "NO_HANDS", "NO_LEGS" ],
     "effect": "attack",

diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/druid.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/druid.json
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@
     "id": "druidic_healing",
     "type": "SPELL",
     "name": "Sacrificial Healing",
-    "description": "Channels some of the user's own life force into healing energy, for the sake of ones allies.",
+    "description": "Channels some of the user's own life force into healing energy, for the sake of one's allies.",
     "valid_targets": [ "ally" ],
     "effect": "attack",
     "shape": "blast",

diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/earthshaper.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/earthshaper.json
@@ -506,7 +506,7 @@
     "id": "eshaper_melee_damage",
     "type": "SPELL",
     "name": "Weighting",
-    "description": "Fill yourself with power of Earth, and make each your attack devastating as quake.",
+    "description": "Fill yourself with the power of Earth, and make each your attacks as devastating as an earthquake.",
     "valid_targets": [ "self" ],
     "effect": "attack",
     "effect_str": "eshaper_melee_damage",

diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/item_only.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/item_only.json
@@ -395,7 +395,7 @@
     "id": "flask_teleport_rand",
     "type": "SPELL",
     "name": "Effugium",
-    "description": "Teleport the caster to random point nearby.",
+    "description": "Teleport the caster to a random point nearby.",
     "effect": "short_range_teleport",
     "shape": "blast",
     "valid_targets": [ "ground" ],
@@ -409,7 +409,7 @@
     "id": "flask_teleport",
     "type": "SPELL",
     "name": "Ecfugium",
-    "description": "Teleport the caster to picked point nearby.",
+    "description": "Teleport the caster to a selected point nearby.",
     "effect": "short_range_teleport",
     "shape": "blast",
     "valid_targets": [ "ground" ],
@@ -490,7 +490,7 @@
     "id": "flask_night_vision",
     "type": "SPELL",
     "name": "Visio",
-    "description": "Grant you an ability to see the night same as the day.",
+    "description": "Grants you the ability to see in the dark.",
     "valid_targets": [ "self" ],
     "effect": "attack",
     "effect_str": "dark_sight",
@@ -541,7 +541,7 @@
     "id": "flask_speed",
     "type": "SPELL",
     "name": "Velocitas",
-    "description": "Make you faster, and allow to hold this state for a while.",
+    "description": "Makes you faster and allows you to be in this state for a while.",
     "valid_targets": [ "self" ],
     "effect": "attack",
     "effect_str": "flask_speed_eff",
@@ -580,7 +580,7 @@
     "id": "flask_rebreather",
     "type": "SPELL",
     "name": "Spiritus",
-    "description": "Allow you to breath underwater.",
+    "description": "Allow you to breathe underwater.",
     "valid_targets": [ "self" ],
     "effect": "spawn_item",
     "effect_str": "flask_ethereal_rebreather",
@@ -593,7 +593,7 @@
     "id": "flask_excitement",
     "type": "SPELL",
     "name": "Motus",
-    "description": "Imrpove your reaction abilities, which makes you a better fighter.",
+    "description": "Improve your reaction abilities, which makes you a better fighter.",
     "valid_targets": [ "self" ],
     "effect": "attack",
     "effect_str": "flask_excitement",
@@ -606,7 +606,7 @@
     "id": "flask_resistance",
     "type": "SPELL",
     "name": "Resistentia",
-    "description": "Thin layer of energy cover your body, and allow you to hold more physical damage than before.",
+    "description": "A thin layer of energy covers your body, and allows you to take more physical damage than before.",
     "valid_targets": [ "self" ],
     "effect": "attack",
     "effect_str": "flask_resistance",

diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/stormshaper.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/stormshaper.json
@@ -844,7 +844,7 @@
     "id": "electric_waves",
     "type": "SPELL",
     "name": "Electric Waves",
-    "description": "Your hands start to emit a huge amount of energy, that you release with each attack.  The damage is increases the more you master the spell.",
+    "description": "Your hands start to emit a huge amount of energy, that you release with each attack.  The damage is increased the more you master the spell.",
     "valid_targets": [ "self" ],
     "effect": "attack",
     "effect_str": "electric_waves",
@@ -869,7 +869,7 @@
     "id": "electric_waves_damage",
     "type": "SPELL",
     "name": { "str": "Electric Waves Damage" },
-    "description": "Blasts, generated by Electric Waves .",
+    "description": "Blasts, generated by Electric Waves.",
     "valid_targets": [ "ally", "hostile", "ground" ],
     "effect": "attack",
     "shape": "blast",

diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/technomancer.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/technomancer.json
@@ -513,7 +513,7 @@
     "type": "SPELL",
     "name": "X-ray Vision",
     "id": "x-ray",
-    "description": "You fire a cone of X-rays that magically allow you to see that area for a short time.",
+    "description": "You fire a cone of X-rays that magically allows you to see that area for a short time.",
     "valid_targets": [ "hostile", "ground", "ally" ],
     "flags": [ "CONCENTRATE", "IGNORE_WALLS" ],
     "effect": "attack",

diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/effects/effects.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/effects/effects.json
@@ -600,7 +600,7 @@
     "id": "flask_resistance",
     "type": "effect_type",
     "name": [ "Resistentia" ],
-    "desc": [ "Thin layer of energy cover your body, and allow you to hold more physical damage than before." ],
+    "desc": [ "A thin layer of energy covers your body, and allows you to take more physical damage than before." ],
     "apply_message": "Your touch sense are blunted for a bit, but your skin feels more dense.",
     "remove_message": "The sturdy feeling is gone.",
     "rating": "good",

diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Radiaton_Mage.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Radiaton_Mage.json
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
     "name": { "str": "Rad Senses" },
     "points": 0,
     "active": true,
-    "description": "You can feel the radiation emission near your body so perfectly it allow you to see while blind.  You suppress it now.",
+    "description": "You can feel the radiation emission near your body so perfectly it allows you to see while blind.  You suppress it now.",
     "transform": {
       "target": "CLAIRVOYANCE_ON",
       "msg_transform": "Living creatures around you are crushed!",
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
     "active": true,
     "name": { "str": "Rad Senses (on)" },
     "points": 0,
-    "description": "You can feel the radiation emission near your body so perfectly it allow you to see while blind.",
+    "description": "You can feel the radiation emission near your body so perfectly it allows you to see while blind.",
     "enchantments": [ "RADIATION_MAGE_CLAIRVOYANCE" ],
     "transform": { "target": "CLAIRVOYANCE_OFF", "msg_transform": "You suppress your frozen pressure.", "active": false, "moves": 10 }
   }

diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Shaman.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Shaman.json
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
     "name": { "str": "Mind Reading" },
     "points": 0,
     "active": true,
-    "description": "You can feel the living energy of creatures around you, which allow you to predict their movements or words.  You suppress it now.",
+    "description": "You can feel the living energy of creatures around you, which allows you to predict their movements or words.  You suppress it now.",
     "transform": { "target": "MIND_READ_ON", "msg_transform": "Living creatures around you are crushed!", "active": true, "moves": 10 }
   },
   {
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
     "active": true,
     "name": { "str": "Mind Reading (on)" },
     "points": 0,
-    "description": "You can feel the living energy of creatures around you, which allow you to predict their movements or words.",
+    "description": "You can feel the living energy of creatures around you, which allows you to predict their movements or words.",
     "enchantments": [ "SHAMAN" ],
     "transform": { "target": "MIND_READ_OFF", "msg_transform": "You suppress your mind abilities.", "active": false, "moves": 10 }
   }

diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Tundra_Mage.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Tundra_Mage.json
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
     "type": "effect_type",
     "id": "freeze_aura",
     "name": [ "Freeze burn" ],
-    "desc": [ "You skin is frozen." ],
+    "desc": [ "Your skin is frozen." ],
     "max_intensity": 3,
     "int_add_val": 1,
     "base_mods": { "speed_mod": [ -25 ] },
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
     "name": { "str": "Freezing Aura" },
     "points": 0,
     "active": true,
-    "description": "Your body emit a large amount of cold energy, which froze all enemies near you.  You suppress this ability now.",
+    "description": "Your body emits a large amount of cold energy, which freezes all enemies near you.  You suppress this ability now.",
     "transform": { "target": "FREEZING_AURA_ON", "msg_transform": "Living creatures around you freezes!", "active": true, "moves": 10 }
   },
   {
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
     "active": true,
     "name": { "str": "Freezing Aura (on)" },
     "points": 0,
-    "description": "Your body emit a large amount of cold energy, which froze all enemies near you.",
+    "description": "Your body emits a large amount of cold energy, which freezes all enemies near you.",
     "enchantments": [ "wither_mage_bio_aoe" ],
     "transform": { "target": "FREEZING_AURA_OFF", "msg_transform": "You suppress your freezing aura.", "active": false, "moves": 10 }
   }

diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Wither_Mage.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Wither_Mage.json
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
     "name": { "str": "Toxic Aura" },
     "points": 0,
     "active": true,
-    "description": "Your body can emit a deadly venoms.  You suppress this ability now.",
+    "description": "Your body can emit deadly venoms.  You suppress this ability now.",
     "transform": { "target": "TOXIC_AURA_ON", "msg_transform": "Living creatures around you are poisoned!", "active": true, "moves": 10 }
   },
   {
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
     "active": true,
     "name": { "str": "Toxic Aura (on)" },
     "points": 0,
-    "description": "Your body can emit a deadly venoms.",
+    "description": "Your body can emit deadly venoms.",
     "enchantments": [ "WITHER_MAGE_BIO_AOE" ],
     "transform": { "target": "TOXIC_AURA_OFF", "msg_transform": "You suppress your toxic aura.", "active": false, "moves": 10 }
   }

diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/furniture.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/furniture.json
@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@
     "type": "furniture",
     "id": "f_everfrost_crystal",
     "name": "everfrost crystal",
-    "description": "This massive mana crystal juts from the ground as if it had sprouted up like a weed.  It pulses with a angry white light, occasionally flickering brighter.",
+    "description": "This massive mana crystal juts from the ground as if it had sprouted up like a weed.  It pulses with an angry white light, occasionally flickering brighter.",
     "symbol": "]",
     "color": "light_blue",
     "move_cost_mod": -1,
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@
     "copy-from": "f_boulder_medium",
     "looks_like": "f_slab",
     "name": "flat boulder",
-    "description": "Smooth, flat boulder.  You can use it both as a table and an anvil.  It respond to your force, and you can easily move it.",
+    "description": "Smooth, flat boulder.  You can use it both as a table and an anvil.  It responds to your force, and you can easily move it.",
     "symbol": "0",
     "color": "dark_gray",
     "move_cost_mod": 6,

diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/furniture_and_terrain/furniture_plants.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/furniture_and_terrain/furniture_plants.json
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     "type": "furniture",
     "id": "f_platonic_flower",
     "name": "platonic flower",
-    "description": "Small bush, that looks like pair of dragon curves, with a flower in the very center.  The branches of the plant can be used as a perfect ruler.",
+    "description": "Small bush, that looks like a pair of dragon curves, with a flower in the very center.  The branches of the plant can be used as a perfect ruler.",
     "symbol": "S",
     "color": "light_cyan",
     "looks_like": "f_bluebell",
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
     "type": "furniture",
     "id": "f_moonflower",
     "name": "moonflower bush",
-    "description": "A silver colored vine, whose luminescent flowers will only bloom during night.\n\nAmazingly rare, it grows only in places were heroic deeds took place, or so it's believed.",
+    "description": "A silver colored vine, whose luminescent flowers will only bloom during night.\n\nAmazingly rare, it grows only in places where heroic deeds took place, or so it's believed.",
     "symbol": "y",
     "color": "light_cyan",
     "looks_like": "f_datura",
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@
     "type": "furniture",
     "id": "f_moly",
     "name": "moly",
-    "description": "A small herb with milk white flowers and pitch black roots.  Known since Ancient Greece, it was brought to the New World by european druids long ago.",
+    "description": "A small herb with milk white flowers and pitch black roots.  Known since Ancient Greece, it was brought to the New World by European druids long ago.",
     "symbol": "f",
     "color": "white",
     "looks_like": "f_lotus",
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@
     "type": "furniture",
     "id": "f_funnelcap",
     "name": "funnelcap",
-    "description": "A man sized mushroom, with most of its bulk defined by a tall funnel shaped pileus, which collects rainfall.",
+    "description": "A man-sized mushroom, with most of its bulk defined by a tall funnel shaped pileus, which collects rainfall.",
     "symbol": "V",
     "color": "white",
     "looks_like": "t_fungal_tree",

diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/books_lore.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/books_lore.json
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
     "type": "GENERIC",
     "category": "maps",
     "name": "lair map",
-    "description": "This is an well worn map.  It has pictures of fantastical beasts embellishing the carefully drawn map markers.",
+    "description": "This is a well worn map.  It has pictures of fantastical beasts embellishing the carefully drawn map markers.",
     "color": "white",
     "use_action": {
       "type": "reveal_map",