Some more cleanup for version 1.1

README.html

@@ -40,10 +40,10 @@ <h3>Application Development</h3>
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                         <h4>Delivery Instructions</h4>
-                        <p>Export your complete database (structure and data) into a <em>database.sql</em>.</p>
+                        <p>After you have finished your work, export your complete database (structure and data) as SQL statements into a file called <em>database.sql</em>.</p>
                         <p>Create a ZIP file (named <em>RM2013_Surname_Prename.zip</em>) with all your application code, the <em>database.sql</em> and the filled out <em>competitior.txt</em> at the end of your work and copy it to the location given to you by your instructor.</p>
                         <h4>Rating Criteria</h4>
-                        <p>Each task gets rated by the implementation of the required functionality. In addition the following criteria apply to all tasks and must match your solution:</p>
+                        <p>Each task gets rated by the implementation of the required functionality of the task. In addition the following criteria apply to all tasks and must match your solution:</p>
                         <p><ul>
                             <li>All code is formatted and indented nicely.</li>
                             <li>Functions and methods are documented within the code (except getter and setter methods).</li>
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ <h4>Rating Criteria</h4>
                                 <li>The website practices good usability principles.</li>
                                 </ul></p>
                         <h4>Infrastructre</h4>
-                        <p>The following software is available for your implementation of this project in the <em>software</em> folder. Please install all needed software on your computer before you begin with the implementation.</p>
+                        <p>The following software is available for your implementation of this project in the <em>software</em> folder. Please make sure all needed software in installed on your computer or install them yourself before you begin with the implementation.</p>
                         <ul>
                             <li>Apache 2.4</li>
                             <li>MySQL 5.5</li>
@@ -67,12 +67,12 @@ <h4>Infrastructre</h4>
                             <li>Firebug 1.11</li>
                             <li>Google Chrome 24</li>
                         </ul>
-                        <p>Version 1.0</p>
+                        <p>Version 1.1</p>
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                         <h4>Project Description</h4>
-                        <p>The project is a social network where people can sign up, connect with friends and share messages and photos with each other.</p>
-                        <p>Parts of the functionality are not finished yet and need to be implemented by you. You are free to use and extend existing parts of the project or implement your own.</p>
+                        <p>The project is a small social network called «Message Board» where people can sign up, connect with friends and share messages and photos with each other.</p>
+                        <p>None of the functionality is done yet and needs to be implemented by you. You’re supposed to use the existing templates to complete the project.</p>
                         <h4>Manuals</h4>
                         <p>You can use the following manuals (available offline):</p>
                         <ul>
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ <h4>Task I: Database</h4>
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                         <p>The model of the application has different entities (message, photo and group) which are not implemented yet.</p>
-                        <p>Your task is to create three new tables in the MySQL database according to the following ERM diagram. Define appropriate column definitions (not null, default, auto increment, unique, foreign key).</p>
+                        <p>Your task is to create three new tables in the MySQL database according to the following ERM diagram. Define appropriate column definitions (data type, not null, default, auto increment, unique, foreign key, etc.).</p>
                         <p>Messages and photos can be posted into groups. A group consists of an ID and a name. Each group can have multiple messages and photos. A message consists of an ID, a textual message, the date it was posted, the author and the group it belongs to. A photo consists of an ID, a binary photo, the location it was taken, the date it was posted, the author and the group it belongs to.</p>
                         <p class="inline">&nbsp;<br><a href="readme/images/erm.png" class="fancybox"><img src="readme/images/erm.png" height="103" alt="ERM"></a></p>
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