Editing page weight chapter

[foxdavidj]

Progress on #218

[foxdavidj]

@tammyeverts @khempenius @rviscomi

I've finished the editing but have a few questions and notes:

1. I removed the mention of latency being governed by the speed of light. This is a really interesting topic to bring up, but needs to be explained further if you're going to mention it.
2. How do you feel about putting the glossary components in a bullet list like i have?
3. Are figure 11 and 12 for images served on mobile?
4. Since we are have captions underneath each table, should we remove the headings File size by image format for images > 100 bytes and File size by image format for images > 1024 bytes?

[rviscomi]

Great job!

Lots of comments. I think you can just do a batch commit for everything. A few require manual intervention.

A few high-level comments:

• 6MB should be written as 6 MB
• 1234% should be written as 1,234%
• figcaptions should end with a period
• headings should be sentence case, not title case
• dashes are almost always not the right punctuation, prefer commas or colons as necessary
• use ellipses sparingly (see above)

[khempenius]

@rviscomi All the suggested changes look fine to me - however Github is saying I don't have permission to push to this repo, so you may need to do that.

[khempenius]

Re: combining desktop & mobile tables into one table: I personally find that type of table more difficult to read, but that's just me - I'd be fine with either style.

[foxdavidj]

@rviscomi Thanks for the edits :)

1. I agree with @khempenius on combining tables. It makes them very difficult to read. I'm a fan of showing both pieces of data separately and then adding additional charts when keying in on specific insights.

2. @khempenius you not being able to push changes here is due to this being from my fork of the repo. If you have extra changes you'd like to make just ping me here and i'll make them for you 👍

[rviscomi]

Ok this is good to go. Any other changes can be filed in a new PR. Thanks everyone!!