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advocacy_docs/partner_docs/VeeamKasten/04-ConfiguringVeeamKasten.mdx

@@ -15,10 +15,13 @@ Implementing EDB Postgres for Kubernetes with Veeam Kasten requires the followin
 - EDB Postgres for Kubernetes external backup adapter configured per your system requirements
 - Veeam Kasten K10 installed on your system
 
+!!! Note
+    The following steps will walk through a sample deployment from start to finish.  You may already have some of these steps implemented in your environment, and if so you can skip that particular step.
+    The **Add the Backup Decorator Annotations to the Cluster** section is the important section for the Kasten addon integration.
 
 ## Install the Operator
 
-If you already have the EDB operator installed on Kubernetes you may skip this step.
+1. Install the EDB Postgres for Kubernetes operator.
 
 ```bash
 kubectl apply -f https://get.enterprisedb.io/cnp/postgresql-operator-1.20.2.yaml
@@ -28,14 +31,36 @@ Running this command will create the operator namespace where the controller wil
 
 ## Create an EDB Cluster, Client and Add Data
 
-If, in your environment, you already have an EDB cluster configured you may skip this step.
-
-1. Initiate the below lines of code in your Kubernetes environment.
+1. Initiate the below lines of code in your Kubernetes environment to create a specific namespace and apply your .yaml file.
 
 ```bash
 kubctl create ns edb
 kubectl apply -f cluster-example.yaml -n edb
 ```
+
+###Example **cluster-example.yaml** file:
+
+```bash
+# Example of PostgreSQL cluster
+apiVersion: postgresql.k8s.enterprisedb.io/v1
+kind: Cluster
+metadata:
+  name: cluster-example
+  annotations:
+    "k8s.enterprisedb.io/addons": '["kasten"]'    
+spec:
+  instances: 3
+  # Example of rolling update strategy:
+  # - unsupervised: automated update of the primary once all
+  #                 replicas have been upgraded (default)
+  # - supervised: requires manual supervision to perform
+  #               the switchover of the primary
+  primaryUpdateStrategy: unsupervised
+  # Require 1Gi of space
+  storage:
+    size: 1Gi
+```
+
 2. Wait until the cluster is completely ready.
 
 ```bash
@@ -44,7 +69,7 @@ NAME              AGE   INSTANCES   READY   STATUS                     PRIMARY
 cluster-example   19m   3           3       Cluster in healthy state   cluster-example-1
 ```
 
-3. Install the cnp plugin, if you have already installed this you may skip this.
+3. Install the cnp plugin.
 
 ```bash
 curl -sSfL \
@@ -61,29 +86,6 @@ kubectl cnp certificate cluster-app \
   -n edb
 ```
 
-**cluster-example.yaml** Example:
-
-```bash
-# Example of PostgreSQL cluster
-apiVersion: postgresql.k8s.enterprisedb.io/v1
-kind: Cluster
-metadata:
-  name: cluster-example
-  annotations:
-    "k8s.enterprisedb.io/addons": '["kasten"]'    
-spec:
-  instances: 3
-  # Example of rolling update strategy:
-  # - unsupervised: automated update of the primary once all
-  #                 replicas have been upgraded (default)
-  # - supervised: requires manual supervision to perform
-  #               the switchover of the primary
-  primaryUpdateStrategy: unsupervised
-  # Require 1Gi of space
-  storage:
-    size: 1Gi
-``` 
-
 5. Create the client.
 
 ```bash
@@ -143,7 +145,7 @@ spec:
             defaultMode: 0600
 ```
 
-6. Add some data.
+6. Add some data into the cluster to test the backup and restore, the following is sample data that was used for this example.
 
 ```bash
 kubectl exec -it deploy/cert-test -- bash
@@ -257,7 +259,9 @@ actions:
 ```
 ## Create a Backup Policy with the EDB hooks
 
-1. Create a policy for the EDB namespace, you will need to set up a location profile for the export and kanister actions.
+1. Launch your Kasten K10 interface.
+
+2. Create a policy for the EDB namespace, you will need to set up a location profile for the export and kanister actions.
 
 Add the hooks example:
     ![Kasten Backup Policy with EDB Hooks](Images/KastenBackupPolicywithHooks.png)

advocacy_docs/partner_docs/VeeamKasten/05-UsingVeeamKasten.mdx

@@ -7,7 +7,9 @@ When you have configured your Kubernetes environment per the `Configuring` secti
 
 ## Launch a Backup
 
-1. Use Veeam Kasten K10 launch a backup that creates two restore points, a local and a remote.
+1. Launch your Kasten K10 interface.
+
+2. Use Veeam Kasten K10 launch a backup that creates two restore points, a local and a remote.
 
 !!! Note
     The Veeam backup process is explained below:
@@ -20,7 +22,7 @@ When you have configured your Kubernetes environment per the `Configuring` secti
     7. The replica leaves the backup mode.
     8. The backup is then over and is consistent for a restore.
 
-2. Delete the namespace `EDB`.
+3. To get ready for a Kasten K10 to complete a restore, this example deleted the namespace `EDB`.
 
 ```bash
 kubectl delete ns edb