From 26ab6abacbc62a32eaeb454a15124afc73f3b0ee Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Mario A. Alvarez Garcia" Date: Tue, 4 Mar 2014 15:43:53 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Update security.rst I'm not a native speaker but I think that it sounds better by adding that before the word `start`. --- book/security.rst | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/book/security.rst b/book/security.rst index 1107c941396..53428e7c0f8 100644 --- a/book/security.rst +++ b/book/security.rst @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ perform a certain action. .. image:: /images/book/security_authentication_authorization.png :align: center -Since the best way to learn is to see an example, start by securing your +Since the best way to learn is to see an example, let's start by securing your application with HTTP Basic authentication. .. note:: From ec2f12c7b96a20613ede65edcca9a015250bc72c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mario Alberto Date: Thu, 27 Mar 2014 11:52:00 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Improved the sentence --- book/security.rst | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/book/security.rst b/book/security.rst index 53428e7c0f8..b1e7aebbe75 100644 --- a/book/security.rst +++ b/book/security.rst @@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ perform a certain action. .. image:: /images/book/security_authentication_authorization.png :align: center -Since the best way to learn is to see an example, let's start by securing your -application with HTTP Basic authentication. +Since the best way to learn is to see an example, just imagine that you want +to secure your application with HTTP Basic authentication. .. note::