diff --git a/python-313/typing/deprecations.py b/python-313/typing/deprecations.py
index 9f8c3c2e4c..7fe8a8fa99 100644
--- a/python-313/typing/deprecations.py
+++ b/python-313/typing/deprecations.py
@@ -1,12 +1,15 @@
 """Demonstration of PEP 702: Marking deprecations using the type system
 
+The deprecations should be marked in PyCharm and VS Code.
+
 Use PyLance in VS Code by setting Python › Analysis: Type Checking Mode or run
 the Pyright CLI:
 
-    $ python -m pip install pyright $ pyright --pythonversion 3.13 .
+    $ python -m pip install pyright
+    $ pyright --pythonversion 3.13 .
 
-Note that showing warnings requires setting the reportDeprecated option in
-Pyright. This is done in pyproject.toml.
+Note that showing warnings with Pyright requires setting the reportDeprecated
+option. This is done in the accompanying pyproject.toml.
 """
 
 from typing import overload
diff --git a/python-313/typing/readonly.py b/python-313/typing/readonly.py
index 5e4e886f1f..05ed0f92f2 100644
--- a/python-313/typing/readonly.py
+++ b/python-313/typing/readonly.py
@@ -11,6 +11,8 @@
 
 from typing import NotRequired, ReadOnly, TypedDict
 
+# %% Without ReadOnly
+
 # class Version(TypedDict):
 #     version: str
 #     release_year: NotRequired[int | None]
@@ -21,22 +23,24 @@
 #     release_year: int
 
 
+# %% Using ReadOnly
+#
+# Can only use PythonVersion as a Version if the differing fields are ReadOnly
 class Version(TypedDict):
-    version: ReadOnly[str]
+    version: str
     release_year: ReadOnly[NotRequired[int | None]]
 
+    # Note that ReadOnly can be nested with other special forms in any order
+    # release_year: NotRequired[ReadOnly[int | None]]
+
 
 class PythonVersion(TypedDict):
-    version: ReadOnly[str]
+    version: str
     release_year: ReadOnly[int]
 
 
-py313 = PythonVersion(version="3.13", release_year=2024)
-
-# Alternative syntax, using TypedDict as an annotation
-# py313: PythonVersion = {"version": "3.13", "release_year": 2024}
-
-
+# %% Work with Version and PythonVersion
+#
 def get_version_info(ver: Version) -> str:
     if "release_year" in ver:
         return f"Version {ver['version']} released in {ver['release_year']}"
@@ -44,5 +48,9 @@ def get_version_info(ver: Version) -> str:
         return f"Version {ver['version']}"
 
 
-# Only allowed to use PythonVersion instead of Version if the fields are ReadOnly
+py313 = PythonVersion(version="3.13", release_year=2024)
+
+# Alternative syntax, using TypedDict as an annotation
+# py313: PythonVersion = {"version": "3.13", "release_year": 2024}
+
 print(get_version_info(py313))