Feedback on my completed Task 2

[maryann-nwagba]

Hello @Judith0001 , @Raffysul , @Kebith
I hope your day is going well.
Please I would love your review of my skill tree, skill table, story outline and script. I have attached them all into this link Here
My fellow contributors, your feedback would be appreciated too.
Thank you.

[phenomenal-dev]

Your work is great @maryann-nwagba. Kudos 👏

[maryann-nwagba]

Thank you @phenomenal-dev

[Lass509]

Hello @maryann-nwagba you have a good skill tree and skill table there. I think brainstorming is usually between two to three sentences. Kindly check your brainstorming.

[maryann-nwagba]

Okay, @Lass509 Thank you for the feedback, really appreciate it.

[RekikEskender]

Nice work @maryann-nwagba I like your brainstoming and how atomic your skills sound.

[maryann-nwagba]

Thank you🙏🏼@RekikEskender

[Raffysul]

@maryann-nwagba Hello, thank you for your submission.

On your Skill Tree:

• Your brainstorming seems interesting, though a bit wordy. You don't need to give a summary of the topic in your brainstorming, just something to pique the learners' interest.
• Your skills are quite few, and it seems like you aren't diving deep enough into these lessons. You can research more on these lessons to get more skills on them.
• Make your questions more of real-life scenarios and make your text input questions simpler.

On your Skill Table, I'll be giving a review on lesson 1, so you can make the necessary corrections on others:

• Good work on your misconceptions and remediation. Very simple and clear.
• There should be no conversation in your skill table, that's for the script. Make your skills' development brief, concise and coherent.
• Use more relatable and real-life scenarios in your questions. Final challenge questions are given at the end of a lesson. Recap questions are also given at the beginning of a new lesson to recall previous knowledge.

On your Story Outline:

• Great work on your story outline. However, you can check the feedback given here Feedback on my Story Outline #1582 to make some corrections.

On your Script:

• Nice work on your script. Your questions are good, but some of them are regurgitation of the concepts. Make your questions a test of learners' understanding of the skills that will require them to make use of their cognitive ability.
• Proofread your work for grammatical and punctuation errors.
• You can peruse the sample script given in the project description, as a guide.

Overall, good work and well done on your submissions.

[maryann-nwagba]

Thank you for this detailed feedback, @Raffysul
I'll make the necessary corrections.