Feedback for Skill Table and Story Outline

[Amarachhhiii]

Hi @Raffysul @Judith0001

I have taken both your feedbacks and I have used it to create my skill table and story outline. Please go through it for me.

Skill table here
Story outline here

Please my fellow contributors I would appreciate your feedback too.

[phenomenal-dev]

Hello @Amarachhhiii

I can imagine the work you've put in this, this is great.

I think you should replace "final question" with "final challenge", because final question kind of means that is the last question and then another question comes up, changing it's meaning.

Also I think you should review your prerequisite and acquired skills, "All skills must be specific, precise, and atomic.
In order to know whether a skill is atomic or not, ask yourself if the skill can be broken down further. If it can, it might not be as atomic as you thought." I quoted this from the guidelines for creating oppia lessons. I think you should just use the same skill from the skill tree.

[Amarachhhiii]

Oh I missed that final challenge question. I will make the correction now. Thank you @phenomenal-dev

I used the skill in the skill tree, but for prerequisite and acquired skills can't be the same as that from the skills on the skill tree because from the guidelines we can see it is different from the skill tree. Also the skill table samples shared, the prerequisite and acquired skills are different from the skill tree skills.

[phenomenal-dev]

@Amarachhhiii

Your story outline needs to be reviewed. It's supposed to be the description of how the story would go, the outline, not the story itself. Can you check?

[Amarachhhiii]

Hello, the story outline is to show the story format the lesson script would take so it is the story itself but with less dialogue.

See here https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SgBVMpuiwfm-EH2Q7GLB8RW8XaNFUH8S4IaImFi7_V8/edit#heading=h.rdmns1jjmf90

[phenomenal-dev]

Ok, that’s alright then

[Judith0001]

Hi @Amarachhhiii, thank you for your submission.

Your skill table looks great, I love the way you've answered 'Why is this topic useful to kids?' and 'What will they be able to do in their lives once they master this topic?'.
I'll be reviewing lesson 1 (you can use this feedback to improve other lessons as well).

• The pre-requisite skills sound more like the acquired skills students will be learning in the lesson. Please note that "It's optional for the first lesson to have pre-requisite skills except if there are certain things learners are expected to know before playing the lesson.

Also, if eventually your Lesson 1 has a pre-requisite skill, your table should begin with 1 or 2 recap questions, testing the learner's knowledge of such skill.

• Secondly, I observed that the 'Acquired skills' you have in your skill table haven't been rephrased well. Acquired skills should be written the same way it appears in your skill tree.

• Looking at the table for Lesson 1, the first skill 'Accurately state the definition of waste in one to two sentences.' should be rephrased. The skills should be phrased in such a way that this can be a question a learner can answer directly; Oppia does not have features to allow you to type in an answer in one to two sentences.

• Most of your questions in the 'Question bank column' are 'Recap questions', what about concept questions or test questions?

• Try to rephrase some of your questions using real-life scenarios. E.g the question 'Which of the following is considered waste?' can be rephrased to sound better using real-life scenarios.

• A lesson can have not more than 3 recap questions at the beginning and not in the middle of such a lesson. I see that your skill 2 and skill 3 both have recap questions which are not supposed to. Please, take another look at the samples provided in task 2 to see where recap questions appear in a lesson.

• Kindly remember to highlight your questions appropriately.

• Final challenge questions should be more difficult questions like Item selection, text input, image region questions. Most of your final challenge questions are multi-choice questions, try including or changing some to other question types.

For your story outline;

• Well done on your story outline. However, you've written it as though you were writing the script. Story outlines shouldn't contain conversations/statements, instead, it is a summary of what should be in the script. Again, please refer to the sample story outlines to see how it should be structured.

Overall, well done on the work you've put into your skill table and story outline 👏

[Amarachhhiii]

Hi @Judith0001 Thank you. I will get to it.