Feedback for my Skill Tree

[Amarachhhiii]

Hi @Raffysul @Judith0001 @Kebith and my fellow contributors, I have just completed my skill tree. I would like to get feedback on it and what I can change in it to make it better. Please let me know if there is any error as well thank you! This is the document.

[maryann-nwagba]

Hi @Amarachhhiii, Great work on this. It is detailed and easy to understand.
While skimming through, I noticed in Lesson 3, under Skill 2 (Que 2), that you asked the students to select all that apply to items that can be recycled. It seems you omitted "Plastic water bottles" as part of the correct answers to the list of items that can be recycled.

[Amarachhhiii]

Hi @maryann-nwagba Thank you I have corrected it.

[debbytech22]

H, @Amarachhhiii , job well done

[IfyOhondu]

Well done @Amarachhhiii. You might need to correct one or two typos.

[Judith0001]

Hi @Amarachhhiii , Weldon on your skill tree. Please find my following observations about it:

1. Your brainstorming sounds nice, but make it more concise and straight to the point.
2. Most of your skills are atomic, however, try to rephrase Lesson 2, Skills 1&2.
3. Lesson 3, skill 2 is not clear enough. The word "understand" is not atomic enough. The skill can be: "Given a type of waste, demonstrate how to apply the best waste management method" or "given a type of waste, apply the best waste management method."
4. Lesson 4, skill 1 can be "Organize a community clean-up event" instead of "Steps for organizing a community clean-up event".
5. Your questions and sentence structure is good. However, lesson 1, questions 2 & 3 were not asked using real-life scenarios, they're just straightforward questions. When you go through the Oppia lessons, you'll notice that the questions are asked using scenarios that learners can relate to. The rest of your questions are great but try to limit the 'you's' and 'yours' (they appear in almost all your questions), feel free to use the names of characters/people.

Great job 👍

[Amarachhhiii]

Thank you @Judith0001 I will get to it right now

[Raffysul]

@Amarachhhiii Hello

Thank you for your submission. In addition:

• You can try adding more skills that you think learners should know. Waste management is quite broad and should have more skills than these.
• Make use of real-life scenarios in your questions and make your sentence structure as simple as possible. Remember your target audience's age range.

Well done

[Amarachhhiii]

Hi @Raffysul Thank you. I will get right to it.