Feedback on Skill Table, Story Outline, and Script.

[Influencer07]

Hi @Kebith @Raffysul,

I would appreciate your feedback on my Skill Table, Story Outline, and Script found in the folder below.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1bKv-_YfxtnKuKd0pruIC3zwq-0sQuBhe?usp=drive_link

Also, during my learner's study, I saw first hand how students got bored with lengthy chapters; so I would like to humbly request your opinion concerning my script which has 25 cards. Do you think the chapter length would too long or if it is a good idea to split the lesson into 2 parts?

I appreciate your time and effort in reviewing my document. Thank you so much.