From 8bf720efb0d77def6d103bdab24bd969568ac4b1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Nicole Zhu <69952136+0xSage@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 16 Sep 2024 11:49:38 +0800
Subject: [PATCH] Update privacy.mdx

better phrasing
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 src/pages/privacy.mdx | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/pages/privacy.mdx b/src/pages/privacy.mdx
index bb77327e..740b7702 100644
--- a/src/pages/privacy.mdx
+++ b/src/pages/privacy.mdx
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ Jan, Cortex, and all Homebrew Computer Company products do not collect personall
 
 ### When you voluntarily provide data
 
-We -do- collect personal information you voluntarily provide us, e.g., when you sign up for our newsletter, join our Discord, or contact us via email. 
+We -do- collect personal information you voluntarily provide us, e.g., your email, when you sign up for our newsletter or contact us via email. 
 
 ### Jan 
 
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ Jan uses [Umami](https://umami.is/) for analytics, which is a privacy-focused, G
 - OS and device characteristics
 - IP address
 
-Jan does not get any of this data, and we do not track IP addresses or other identifying information. We are actively looking into more privacy-respecting ways to handle analytics, crash reports, and telemetry and would love to work with the community on this. 
+Jan, however, does not retain this data. We do not track IP addresses or other identifying information. We are actively looking into more privacy-respecting ways to handle analytics, crash reports, and telemetry and would love to work with the community on this. 
 
 ### Cortex