diff --git a/draft-ietf-httpbis-safe-method-w-body.xml b/draft-ietf-httpbis-safe-method-w-body.xml index 283967822..e2419ce31 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-httpbis-safe-method-w-body.xml +++ b/draft-ietf-httpbis-safe-method-w-body.xml @@ -484,10 +484,11 @@ Dubois, Camille, camille.dubois@example.net - The QUERY method can be used as an alternative to passing query - information in the query portion of a URI. This is preferred in some - cases, as the URI is more likely to be logged than the request content. If - a server creates a temporary resource to represent the results of a QUERY + The QUERY method can be used as an alternative to passing request + information in the URI (e.g., in the query section). This is preferred in some + cases, as the URI is more likely to be logged or otherwise processed + by intermediaries than the request content. + If a server creates a temporary resource to represent the results of a QUERY request (e.g., for use in the Location or Content-Location field) and the request contains sensitive information that cannot be logged, then the URI of this resource &SHOULD; be chosen such that it does not include any sensitive