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public/modules/pages/views/privacy.client.view.html

@@ -15,15 +15,15 @@ <h2>Privacy</h2>
 
         <h3>Your data is yours</h3>
 
-        Hopefully soon enough you will be able to download your profile data.
+        Soon enough you will be able to download your profile data.
 
         <br><br>
 
-        Also hopefully soon you will be able to remove your profile completelly from the system. Currently you can ask us to do so and the feature itself is in development.
+        Also soon you will be able to remove your profile completelly from the system. Currently you can ask us to do so and the feature itself is in development.
 
         <br><br>
 
-        We will never ever sell your profile data to anone or try to use it otherwise commercially.
+        We will never ever sell your profile data to anyone or try to otherwise use it commercially.
 
 
         <h3>Analytics & opting out</h3>
@@ -32,11 +32,11 @@ <h3>Analytics & opting out</h3>
 
         <br><br>
 
-        To opt-out of Google Analytics tracking, you could install Google's official <a href="https://tools.google.com/dlpage/gaoptout" target="_blank">opt out extension</a>. To opt-out of all tracking (including Google Analytics and Piwik) you could install <a href="https://www.ghostery.com/" target="_blank">Ghostery</a>, <a href="https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/addon/noscript/" target="_blank">Noscript</a> or <a href="https://disconnect.me/" target="_blank">Disconnect</a>. These browser extensions will disable all the known JavaScript trackers and ensure that your browser does not send a request to external tracking servers.
+        To opt-out of Google Analytics tracking, you could install Google's official <a href="https://tools.google.com/dlpage/gaoptout" target="_blank">opt out extension</a>. To opt-out of all tracking (including Google Analytics and Piwik) you can install <a href="https://www.ghostery.com/" target="_blank">Ghostery</a>, <a href="https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/addon/noscript/" target="_blank">Noscript</a> or <a href="https://disconnect.me/" target="_blank">Disconnect</a>. These browser extensions will disable all known JavaScript trackers and ensure that your browser does not send a request to external tracking servers.
 
         <br><br>
 
-        If you wish to stay completely anonymous online, please see the guide by Piwik <a href="http://piwik.org/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/How-to-remain-anonymous-online.pdf" target="_blank">How to remain anonymous online?</a> (PDF).
+        If you wish to stay completely anonymous online, please check this guide by Piwik: <a href="http://piwik.org/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/How-to-remain-anonymous-online.pdf" target="_blank">How to remain anonymous online? (PDF)</a>.
 
 
         <h3>Social networks</h3>
@@ -45,16 +45,15 @@ <h3>Social networks</h3>
 
         <br><br>
 
-        Some of our users want to use these networks and they have a right to do so.
-
+        Some of our users want to use these networks and they have a right to do so. Others prefer to steer away from these networks and we'll also accommodate these users.
 
         <h3>Your emails</h3>
 
         We route all our emails using <a href="http://mandrillapp.com" target="_blank">Mandrill</a>. They're reliable, professional and we trust them. They do much better job than we could ever do and privacy wise using their service equals to buying a server space from somewhere else.
 
         <br><br>
 
-        If you subscribe for newsletters, your email will be stored at <a href="http://www.mailchimp.com" target="_blank">MailChimp</a> since we use them to send newsletters. MailChimp and Mandrill are the same company, just via Mandrill nothing is stored.
+        If you subscribe to our newsletters, your email will be stored at <a href="http://www.mailchimp.com" target="_blank">MailChimp</a> since we use them to send newsletters. MailChimp and Mandrill are the same company, just via Mandrill nothing is stored.
 
 
         <h3>Our server</h3>

public/modules/pages/views/todo.client.view.html

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ <h2>Todo</h2>
       </div>
 
       <p>
-        You can follow our work also at <a href="https://github.com/trustroots/trustroots/issues">GitHub</a>.
+        You can follow our progress at <a href="https://github.com/trustroots/trustroots/issues">GitHub</a>.
         <br><br>
       </p>
 
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ <h4>The Map</h4>
       <h4>Profiles</h4>
       <ul>
         <li>Try to allow importing some data from CouchSurfing</li>
-        <li>Show what you have in common with user (common friends etc)</li>
+        <li>Show what you have in common with users (common friends etc.)</li>
         <li>Upload your own avatar</li>
       </ul>
 
@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@ <h4>Other</h4>
         <li>Notifications from new messages at the header</li>
         <li>Communities (groups such as "hitchhikers" or "geeks")</li>
         <li>Text versions for all emails</li>
-        <li>More mobile friendly</li>
+        <li>More mobile friendly, responsive</li>
         <li>Connect your profile to <a href="http://hitchwiki.org">Hitchwiki</a>, <a href="http://nomadwiki.org">Nomadwiki</a> and <a href="http://trashwiki.org">Trashwiki</a></li>
-        <li>Login with email</li>
+        <li>Log in with email</li>
         <li>API</li>
       </ul>