From e164cbc610e59145451647e0bc55a477a731a75b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: casswedson <58050969+casswedson@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sun, 11 Dec 2022 10:27:22 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] more typo fixes (#62675) * typo fixes * Apply suggestions from code review Co-authored-by: NetSysFire <59517351+NetSysFire@users.noreply.github.com> * Apply suggestions from code review Co-authored-by: Maleclypse <54345792+Maleclypse@users.noreply.github.com> * Apply suggestions from code review Co-authored-by: Maleclypse <54345792+Maleclypse@users.noreply.github.com> * Apply suggestions from code review Co-authored-by: Maleclypse <54345792+Maleclypse@users.noreply.github.com> Co-authored-by: casswedson Co-authored-by: NetSysFire <59517351+NetSysFire@users.noreply.github.com> Co-authored-by: Maleclypse <54345792+Maleclypse@users.noreply.github.com> --- .../Spells/attunements/Stormcaller.json | 2 +- data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/biomancer.json | 2 +- data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/black_dragon.json | 2 +- data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/druid.json | 2 +- data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/earthshaper.json | 2 +- data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/item_only.json | 14 +++++------ data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/stormshaper.json | 4 ++-- data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/technomancer.json | 2 +- data/mods/Magiclysm/effects/effects.json | 2 +- .../Magiclysm/enchantments/Radiaton_Mage.json | 4 ++-- data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Shaman.json | 4 ++-- .../Magiclysm/enchantments/Tundra_Mage.json | 6 ++--- .../Magiclysm/enchantments/Wither_Mage.json | 4 ++-- data/mods/Magiclysm/furniture.json | 4 ++-- .../furniture_plants.json | 8 +++---- data/mods/Magiclysm/items/books_lore.json | 2 +- .../Magiclysm/items/cast_spell_items.json | 24 +++++++++---------- data/mods/Magiclysm/items/constructs.json | 4 ++-- data/mods/Magiclysm/items/enchanted.json | 2 +- .../Magiclysm/items/enchanted_bracelet.json | 2 +- .../Magiclysm/items/herbs_and_flowers.json | 2 +- data/mods/Magiclysm/items/melee.json | 2 +- data/mods/Magiclysm/items/mutagen.json | 2 +- data/mods/Magiclysm/items/recipe_books.json | 2 +- data/mods/Magiclysm/items/spell_scrolls.json | 10 ++++---- data/mods/Magiclysm/items/spellbooks.json | 2 +- data/mods/Magiclysm/monsters/monsters.json | 14 +++++------ data/mods/Magiclysm/monsters/orcs.json | 4 ++-- .../monsters/zombified_monsters.json | 6 ++--- data/mods/Magiclysm/mutations/mutations.json | 2 +- data/mods/Magiclysm/professions.json | 4 ++-- 31 files changed, 73 insertions(+), 73 deletions(-) diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/attunements/Stormcaller.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/attunements/Stormcaller.json index 0cc40ed07c9c1..b619ea1de42e1 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/attunements/Stormcaller.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/attunements/Stormcaller.json @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ "id": "electric_turret", "type": "SPELL", "name": { "str": "Thunder Pillar" }, - "description": "Summon an immovable pillars, that will attack your enemies with devastating lightnings.", + "description": "Summon immovable pillars, that will attack your enemies with devastating lightning bolts.", "valid_targets": [ "ground" ], "flags": [ "SOMATIC", "VERBAL", "CONCENTRATE", "RANDOM_TARGET" ], "effect": "summon", diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/biomancer.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/biomancer.json index 81f78af434f11..bf5ddc8fa85b6 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/biomancer.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/biomancer.json @@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ "id": "biomancer_visceral_projection", "type": "SPELL", "name": "Visceral Projection", - "description": "Projects a spray of acrid blood and gore all around you, growing to ensnare your prey in in a field of twitching poisonous tendrils.", + "description": "Projects a spray of acrid blood and gore all around you, growing to ensnare your prey in a field of twitching poisonous tendrils.", "valid_targets": [ "ally", "hostile", "ground" ], "effect": "attack", "effect_str": "badpoison", diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/black_dragon.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/black_dragon.json index 905f629ece0a3..683cd186d0560 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/black_dragon.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/black_dragon.json @@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ "id": "dragon_spit_acid", "type": "SPELL", "name": "Dragon Acid Spit", - "description": "You conjur up acidic spittle that you can shoot long distances as you close on your terrified prey.", + "description": "You conjure up acidic spittle that you can shoot long distances as you close in on your terrified prey.", "valid_targets": [ "hostile" ], "flags": [ "LOUD", "VERBAL", "NO_HANDS", "NO_LEGS" ], "effect": "attack", diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/druid.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/druid.json index 512ce47759ae0..32c5add05e218 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/druid.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/druid.json @@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ "id": "druidic_healing", "type": "SPELL", "name": "Sacrificial Healing", - "description": "Channels some of the user's own life force into healing energy, for the sake of ones allies.", + "description": "Channels some of the user's own life force into healing energy, for the sake of one's allies.", "valid_targets": [ "ally" ], "effect": "attack", "shape": "blast", diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/earthshaper.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/earthshaper.json index 11290ed3bfedb..4413732465cb8 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/earthshaper.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/earthshaper.json @@ -506,7 +506,7 @@ "id": "eshaper_melee_damage", "type": "SPELL", "name": "Weighting", - "description": "Fill yourself with power of Earth, and make each your attack devastating as quake.", + "description": "Fill yourself with the power of Earth, and make each your attacks as devastating as an earthquake.", "valid_targets": [ "self" ], "effect": "attack", "effect_str": "eshaper_melee_damage", diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/item_only.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/item_only.json index 0f6ad0ac11206..01c5e527fa043 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/item_only.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/item_only.json @@ -395,7 +395,7 @@ "id": "flask_teleport_rand", "type": "SPELL", "name": "Effugium", - "description": "Teleport the caster to random point nearby.", + "description": "Teleport the caster to a random point nearby.", "effect": "short_range_teleport", "shape": "blast", "valid_targets": [ "ground" ], @@ -409,7 +409,7 @@ "id": "flask_teleport", "type": "SPELL", "name": "Ecfugium", - "description": "Teleport the caster to picked point nearby.", + "description": "Teleport the caster to a selected point nearby.", "effect": "short_range_teleport", "shape": "blast", "valid_targets": [ "ground" ], @@ -490,7 +490,7 @@ "id": "flask_night_vision", "type": "SPELL", "name": "Visio", - "description": "Grant you an ability to see the night same as the day.", + "description": "Grants you the ability to see in the dark.", "valid_targets": [ "self" ], "effect": "attack", "effect_str": "dark_sight", @@ -541,7 +541,7 @@ "id": "flask_speed", "type": "SPELL", "name": "Velocitas", - "description": "Make you faster, and allow to hold this state for a while.", + "description": "Makes you faster and allows you to be in this state for a while.", "valid_targets": [ "self" ], "effect": "attack", "effect_str": "flask_speed_eff", @@ -580,7 +580,7 @@ "id": "flask_rebreather", "type": "SPELL", "name": "Spiritus", - "description": "Allow you to breath underwater.", + "description": "Allow you to breathe underwater.", "valid_targets": [ "self" ], "effect": "spawn_item", "effect_str": "flask_ethereal_rebreather", @@ -593,7 +593,7 @@ "id": "flask_excitement", "type": "SPELL", "name": "Motus", - "description": "Imrpove your reaction abilities, which makes you a better fighter.", + "description": "Improve your reaction abilities, which makes you a better fighter.", "valid_targets": [ "self" ], "effect": "attack", "effect_str": "flask_excitement", @@ -606,7 +606,7 @@ "id": "flask_resistance", "type": "SPELL", "name": "Resistentia", - "description": "Thin layer of energy cover your body, and allow you to hold more physical damage than before.", + "description": "A thin layer of energy covers your body, and allows you to take more physical damage than before.", "valid_targets": [ "self" ], "effect": "attack", "effect_str": "flask_resistance", diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/stormshaper.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/stormshaper.json index 3f4dc16aee568..e77ab024508e3 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/stormshaper.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/stormshaper.json @@ -844,7 +844,7 @@ "id": "electric_waves", "type": "SPELL", "name": "Electric Waves", - "description": "Your hands start to emit a huge amount of energy, that you release with each attack. The damage is increases the more you master the spell.", + "description": "Your hands start to emit a huge amount of energy, that you release with each attack. The damage is increased the more you master the spell.", "valid_targets": [ "self" ], "effect": "attack", "effect_str": "electric_waves", @@ -869,7 +869,7 @@ "id": "electric_waves_damage", "type": "SPELL", "name": { "str": "Electric Waves Damage" }, - "description": "Blasts, generated by Electric Waves .", + "description": "Blasts, generated by Electric Waves.", "valid_targets": [ "ally", "hostile", "ground" ], "effect": "attack", "shape": "blast", diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/technomancer.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/technomancer.json index d6c8573967b4a..ae69cff5d6a49 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/technomancer.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/Spells/technomancer.json @@ -513,7 +513,7 @@ "type": "SPELL", "name": "X-ray Vision", "id": "x-ray", - "description": "You fire a cone of X-rays that magically allow you to see that area for a short time.", + "description": "You fire a cone of X-rays that magically allows you to see that area for a short time.", "valid_targets": [ "hostile", "ground", "ally" ], "flags": [ "CONCENTRATE", "IGNORE_WALLS" ], "effect": "attack", diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/effects/effects.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/effects/effects.json index 67918e6250af5..60ad6def3cb66 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/effects/effects.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/effects/effects.json @@ -600,7 +600,7 @@ "id": "flask_resistance", "type": "effect_type", "name": [ "Resistentia" ], - "desc": [ "Thin layer of energy cover your body, and allow you to hold more physical damage than before." ], + "desc": [ "A thin layer of energy covers your body, and allows you to take more physical damage than before." ], "apply_message": "Your touch sense are blunted for a bit, but your skin feels more dense.", "remove_message": "The sturdy feeling is gone.", "rating": "good", diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Radiaton_Mage.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Radiaton_Mage.json index 7a542d324c9f7..04ebed1a1a129 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Radiaton_Mage.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Radiaton_Mage.json @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ "name": { "str": "Rad Senses" }, "points": 0, "active": true, - "description": "You can feel the radiation emission near your body so perfectly it allow you to see while blind. You suppress it now.", + "description": "You can feel the radiation emission near your body so perfectly it allows you to see while blind. You suppress it now.", "transform": { "target": "CLAIRVOYANCE_ON", "msg_transform": "Living creatures around you are crushed!", @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ "active": true, "name": { "str": "Rad Senses (on)" }, "points": 0, - "description": "You can feel the radiation emission near your body so perfectly it allow you to see while blind.", + "description": "You can feel the radiation emission near your body so perfectly it allows you to see while blind.", "enchantments": [ "RADIATION_MAGE_CLAIRVOYANCE" ], "transform": { "target": "CLAIRVOYANCE_OFF", "msg_transform": "You suppress your frozen pressure.", "active": false, "moves": 10 } } diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Shaman.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Shaman.json index a278a89d6f795..cd773c6e18c44 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Shaman.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Shaman.json @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ "name": { "str": "Mind Reading" }, "points": 0, "active": true, - "description": "You can feel the living energy of creatures around you, which allow you to predict their movements or words. You suppress it now.", + "description": "You can feel the living energy of creatures around you, which allows you to predict their movements or words. You suppress it now.", "transform": { "target": "MIND_READ_ON", "msg_transform": "Living creatures around you are crushed!", "active": true, "moves": 10 } }, { @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ "active": true, "name": { "str": "Mind Reading (on)" }, "points": 0, - "description": "You can feel the living energy of creatures around you, which allow you to predict their movements or words.", + "description": "You can feel the living energy of creatures around you, which allows you to predict their movements or words.", "enchantments": [ "SHAMAN" ], "transform": { "target": "MIND_READ_OFF", "msg_transform": "You suppress your mind abilities.", "active": false, "moves": 10 } } diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Tundra_Mage.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Tundra_Mage.json index fddd83bd6c6aa..b1044646d101b 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Tundra_Mage.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Tundra_Mage.json @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ "type": "effect_type", "id": "freeze_aura", "name": [ "Freeze burn" ], - "desc": [ "You skin is frozen." ], + "desc": [ "Your skin is frozen." ], "max_intensity": 3, "int_add_val": 1, "base_mods": { "speed_mod": [ -25 ] }, @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ "name": { "str": "Freezing Aura" }, "points": 0, "active": true, - "description": "Your body emit a large amount of cold energy, which froze all enemies near you. You suppress this ability now.", + "description": "Your body emits a large amount of cold energy, which freezes all enemies near you. You suppress this ability now.", "transform": { "target": "FREEZING_AURA_ON", "msg_transform": "Living creatures around you freezes!", "active": true, "moves": 10 } }, { @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ "active": true, "name": { "str": "Freezing Aura (on)" }, "points": 0, - "description": "Your body emit a large amount of cold energy, which froze all enemies near you.", + "description": "Your body emits a large amount of cold energy, which freezes all enemies near you.", "enchantments": [ "wither_mage_bio_aoe" ], "transform": { "target": "FREEZING_AURA_OFF", "msg_transform": "You suppress your freezing aura.", "active": false, "moves": 10 } } diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Wither_Mage.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Wither_Mage.json index a7c2825041c6b..e941769927887 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Wither_Mage.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/enchantments/Wither_Mage.json @@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ "name": { "str": "Toxic Aura" }, "points": 0, "active": true, - "description": "Your body can emit a deadly venoms. You suppress this ability now.", + "description": "Your body can emit deadly venoms. You suppress this ability now.", "transform": { "target": "TOXIC_AURA_ON", "msg_transform": "Living creatures around you are poisoned!", "active": true, "moves": 10 } }, { @@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ "active": true, "name": { "str": "Toxic Aura (on)" }, "points": 0, - "description": "Your body can emit a deadly venoms.", + "description": "Your body can emit deadly venoms.", "enchantments": [ "WITHER_MAGE_BIO_AOE" ], "transform": { "target": "TOXIC_AURA_OFF", "msg_transform": "You suppress your toxic aura.", "active": false, "moves": 10 } } diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/furniture.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/furniture.json index 8a7b17bc35d40..febb0336a3f03 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/furniture.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/furniture.json @@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ "type": "furniture", "id": "f_everfrost_crystal", "name": "everfrost crystal", - "description": "This massive mana crystal juts from the ground as if it had sprouted up like a weed. It pulses with a angry white light, occasionally flickering brighter.", + "description": "This massive mana crystal juts from the ground as if it had sprouted up like a weed. It pulses with an angry white light, occasionally flickering brighter.", "symbol": "]", "color": "light_blue", "move_cost_mod": -1, @@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ "copy-from": "f_boulder_medium", "looks_like": "f_slab", "name": "flat boulder", - "description": "Smooth, flat boulder. You can use it both as a table and an anvil. It respond to your force, and you can easily move it.", + "description": "Smooth, flat boulder. You can use it both as a table and an anvil. It responds to your force, and you can easily move it.", "symbol": "0", "color": "dark_gray", "move_cost_mod": 6, diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/furniture_and_terrain/furniture_plants.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/furniture_and_terrain/furniture_plants.json index a48d14e3e0102..a34a7dd26aa44 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/furniture_and_terrain/furniture_plants.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/furniture_and_terrain/furniture_plants.json @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ "type": "furniture", "id": "f_platonic_flower", "name": "platonic flower", - "description": "Small bush, that looks like pair of dragon curves, with a flower in the very center. The branches of the plant can be used as a perfect ruler.", + "description": "Small bush, that looks like a pair of dragon curves, with a flower in the very center. The branches of the plant can be used as a perfect ruler.", "symbol": "S", "color": "light_cyan", "looks_like": "f_bluebell", @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ "type": "furniture", "id": "f_moonflower", "name": "moonflower bush", - "description": "A silver colored vine, whose luminescent flowers will only bloom during night.\n\nAmazingly rare, it grows only in places were heroic deeds took place, or so it's believed.", + "description": "A silver colored vine, whose luminescent flowers will only bloom during night.\n\nAmazingly rare, it grows only in places where heroic deeds took place, or so it's believed.", "symbol": "y", "color": "light_cyan", "looks_like": "f_datura", @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ "type": "furniture", "id": "f_moly", "name": "moly", - "description": "A small herb with milk white flowers and pitch black roots. Known since Ancient Greece, it was brought to the New World by european druids long ago.", + "description": "A small herb with milk white flowers and pitch black roots. Known since Ancient Greece, it was brought to the New World by European druids long ago.", "symbol": "f", "color": "white", "looks_like": "f_lotus", @@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ "type": "furniture", "id": "f_funnelcap", "name": "funnelcap", - "description": "A man sized mushroom, with most of its bulk defined by a tall funnel shaped pileus, which collects rainfall.", + "description": "A man-sized mushroom, with most of its bulk defined by a tall funnel shaped pileus, which collects rainfall.", "symbol": "V", "color": "white", "looks_like": "t_fungal_tree", diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/books_lore.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/books_lore.json index c7b82de1c6091..bb414634c47e6 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/books_lore.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/books_lore.json @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ "type": "GENERIC", "category": "maps", "name": "lair map", - "description": "This is an well worn map. It has pictures of fantastical beasts embellishing the carefully drawn map markers.", + "description": "This is a well worn map. It has pictures of fantastical beasts embellishing the carefully drawn map markers.", "color": "white", "use_action": { "type": "reveal_map", diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/cast_spell_items.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/cast_spell_items.json index 2253e5274fef6..66cfc95764dda 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/cast_spell_items.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/cast_spell_items.json @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ "id": "flask_confusion", "type": "COMESTIBLE", "name": { "str": "potion of instability", "str_pl": "potions of instability" }, - "description": "That thing temporary freeze the high brain activity for a while. It was banned by the government due the popularity in crime sphere, but some people still know the recipe.", + "description": "A potion that temporarily freezes the higher brain activity for a while. It was banned by the government due to popularity in the criminal sphere, but some people still know the recipe.", "copy-from": "mana_potion_lesser", "calories": 0, "use_action": { "type": "cast_spell", "spell_id": "flask_confusion", "no_fail": true, "level": 0 }, @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ "id": "flask_teleport", "type": "COMESTIBLE", "name": { "str": "potion of teleportation", "str_pl": "potions of teleportation" }, - "description": "Important part of every professional robber. It was banned by the government due the popularity in crime sphere, but some people still know the recipe.", + "description": "Important part of every professional robber's kit. It was banned by the government due to the popularity in criminal sphere, but some people still know the recipe.", "copy-from": "mana_potion_lesser", "calories": 260, "use_action": { "type": "cast_spell", "spell_id": "flask_teleport", "no_fail": true, "level": 0 }, @@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ "id": "flask_invisibility", "type": "COMESTIBLE", "name": { "str": "potion of invisibility", "str_pl": "potions of invisibility" }, - "description": "Make you totally invisible, except in mana spectrum. It was banned by the government due the popularity in crime sphere, but some people still know the recipe.", + "description": "Make you totally invisible, except in mana spectrum. It was banned by the government due to the popularity in crime sphere, but some people still know the recipe.", "copy-from": "mana_potion_lesser", "calories": 77, "use_action": { "type": "cast_spell", "spell_id": "flask_invisibility", "no_fail": true, "level": 0 }, @@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ "id": "flask_healing", "type": "COMESTIBLE", "name": { "str": "potion of healthiness", "str_pl": "potions of healthiness" }, - "description": "Classical medicine, used from ancient times, that came to us with almost no changes. Allow you to heal the common illness way faster than before.", + "description": "Classical medicine, used from ancient times, that came to us with almost no changes. Allows you to heal the common illness way faster than before.", "copy-from": "mana_potion_lesser", "calories": 358, "use_action": { "type": "cast_spell", "spell_id": "flask_healing", "no_fail": true, "level": 0 }, @@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ "id": "flask_charm", "type": "COMESTIBLE", "name": { "str": "potion of domination", "str_pl": "potions of domination" }, - "description": "Rearrange neural activity of the creature to be 100% loyal to a blood owner. It was banned by the government due the popularity in crime sphere, but some people still know the recipe.", + "description": "Rearrange neural activity of the creature to be 100% loyal to a blood owner. It was banned by the government due to the popularity in crime sphere, but some people still know the recipe.", "copy-from": "mana_potion_lesser", "calories": 21, "use_action": { "type": "cast_spell", "spell_id": "flask_charm", "no_fail": true, "level": 0 }, @@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ "id": "flask_speed", "type": "COMESTIBLE", "name": { "str": "potion of sprint", "str_pl": "potions of sprint" }, - "description": "They counts as doping in olympic games. Luckily you are not in stadium.", + "description": "They count as doping in olympic games. Luckily you are not in a stadium.", "copy-from": "mana_potion_lesser", "calories": 26, "use_action": { "type": "cast_spell", "spell_id": "flask_speed", "no_fail": true, "level": 0 }, @@ -223,7 +223,7 @@ "id": "flask_stamina", "type": "COMESTIBLE", "name": { "str": "potion of iron lungs", "str_pl": "potions of iron lungs" }, - "description": "Old recipe, used to increase the user's endurance. The diluted version was used by a different armies for fast and long forced marches.", + "description": "Old recipe, used to increase the user's endurance. The diluted version was used by different armies for fast and long forced marches.", "copy-from": "mana_potion_lesser", "calories": 156, "use_action": { "type": "cast_spell", "spell_id": "flask_stamina", "no_fail": true, "level": 0 }, @@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ "id": "flask_excitement", "type": "COMESTIBLE", "name": { "str": "potion of stimulus", "str_pl": "potions of stimulus" }, - "description": "One of the various potions, designed to make person stronger on battle field. Increase the user's senses and improve the reaction, increasing his ability to fight in melee.", + "description": "One of the various potions, designed to make a person stronger on the battle field. Increase the user's senses and improve reactions, increasing their ability to fight in melee.", "copy-from": "mana_potion_lesser", "calories": 89, "use_action": { "type": "cast_spell", "spell_id": "flask_excitement", "no_fail": true, "level": 0 }, @@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ "id": "flask_resistance", "type": "COMESTIBLE", "name": { "str": "potion of iron skin", "str_pl": "potions of iron skin" }, - "description": "Harden the user's skin, and allow to take more damage with no harm. Was popular in ancient armies, but now mostly forgotten.", + "description": "Harden the user's skin, and allow taking more damage with no harm. Was popular in ancient armies, but now mostly forgotten.", "copy-from": "mana_potion_lesser", "calories": 211, "use_action": { "type": "cast_spell", "spell_id": "flask_resistance", "no_fail": true, "level": 0 }, @@ -263,7 +263,7 @@ "id": "flask_illumination", "type": "COMESTIBLE", "name": { "str": "potion of illumination", "str_pl": "potions of illumination" }, - "description": "That potion was designed in 19th century, for miners that was awared of explosive gas leaks in the mine. Not so popular now, due the abundance of electric lighters, but still useful sometimes.", + "description": "That potion was designed in 19th century, for miners aware of explosive gas leaks in the mine. Not so popular now, due to the abundance of electric lighters, but still useful sometimes.", "copy-from": "mana_potion_lesser", "calories": 7, "use_action": { "type": "cast_spell", "spell_id": "flask_illumination", "no_fail": true, "level": 0 }, @@ -303,7 +303,7 @@ "id": "flask_mood", "type": "COMESTIBLE", "name": { "str": "potion of happiness", "str_pl": "potions of happiness" }, - "description": "More than alcohol drink than potion, this mixture make your brain feel constant happiness, ignoring the whole boredom of reality. It cause no addiction, but it still banned in some countries, including the USA (except the Texas and New Hampshire, where it's just frowned upon)", + "description": "More than alcohol drink than a potion, this mixture makes your brain feel constant happiness, ignoring the whole boredom of reality. It causes no addiction, but it still banned in some countries, including the USA (except the Texas and New Hampshire, where it's just frowned upon)", "copy-from": "mana_potion_lesser", "calories": 65, "use_action": { "type": "cast_spell", "spell_id": "flask_mood", "no_fail": true, "level": 0 }, @@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ "id": "flask_toxin", "type": "COMESTIBLE", "name": { "str": "potion of toxin", "str_pl": "potions of toxin" }, - "description": "Spread a low lethal toxin on your enemies. Its surprisingly effective, if you have enough time.", + "description": "Spread a low lethal toxin on your enemies. It's surprisingly effective, if you have enough time.", "copy-from": "mana_potion_lesser", "calories": 0, "use_action": { "type": "cast_spell", "spell_id": "flask_toxin", "no_fail": true, "level": 0 }, diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/constructs.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/constructs.json index 5502bddb9828c..8650c9b8c2293 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/constructs.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/constructs.json @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ "color": "light_gray", "name": "broken stone golem", "category": "other", - "description": "A broken stone golem, not that much different from big boulder. Could be smashed for stone.", + "description": "A broken stone golem, not that much different from a big boulder. Could be smashed for stone.", "price": 10000, "material": [ "stone" ], "weight": "162 kg", @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ "color": "light_gray", "name": "broken stone golem", "category": "other", - "description": "A broken earthshaper's golem, almost same as his natural stone counterpart. Could be smashed for stone.", + "description": "A broken earthshaper's golem, almost the same as it's natural stone counterpart. Could be smashed for stone.", "price": 10000, "material": [ "stone" ], "weight": "112 kg", diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/enchanted.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/enchanted.json index 75c65c047569b..4cb0f4e5af62b 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/enchanted.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/enchanted.json @@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ "type": "TOOL_ARMOR", "looks_like": "holster", "name": { "str": "Bag of Infinite Throwing Knives", "str_pl": "Bags of Infinite Throwing Knives" }, - "description": "This bag conjures a magical throwing knife on activation. Only refills when worn. It also boost your throwing abilities.", + "description": "This bag conjures a magical throwing knife on activation. Only refills when worn. It also boosts your throwing abilities.", "//": "the bag itself gives +3 to throwing instead of knifes because of stupid code oogie woogie, that make effects (and enchantments, it seems) being apply in the very first move after the giving. ie if you give +3 to throwing for a knife, spawn it, and then throw it, it wont be applied", "price": 800000, "price_postapoc": "1800 USD", diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/enchanted_bracelet.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/enchanted_bracelet.json index 8147851790d07..a8eb0be3471d4 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/enchanted_bracelet.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/enchanted_bracelet.json @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ "id": "disorientation_bracelet", "type": "TOOL_ARMOR", "name": { "str": "disorientation bracelet" }, - "description": "Known as \"a worse version of petrification bracelet\", this tool casts a spell that temporarily breaks the whole movement system of creature, disabling its movement for a short time. Require almost a week to restore its charge.", + "description": "Known as \"a worse version of petrification bracelet\", this tool casts a spell that temporarily breaks the whole movement system of a creature, disabling its movement for a short time. Require almost a week to restore its charge.", "price_postapoc": "5600 USD", "extend": { "flags": [ "NO_UNLOAD", "NO_RELOAD" ] }, "delete": { "flags": [ "NO_WEAR_EFFECT" ] }, diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/herbs_and_flowers.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/herbs_and_flowers.json index 2c22d14a9c608..48384252977da 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/herbs_and_flowers.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/herbs_and_flowers.json @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ "type": "GENERIC", "id": "olieribos", "name": { "str": "olieribos sheaf", "str_pl": "olieribos sheaves" }, - "description": "Dark colored leaves and bitter roots, firmly tied together in a small sheaf. It's not toxic, but a lot of people died, trying to taste it, due the airway obstruction.", + "description": "Dark colored leaves and bitter roots, firmly tied together in a small sheaf. It's not toxic, but a lot of people died, trying to taste it, due to the airway obstruction.", "//": "armor' and 'summon' related", "price_postapoc": 400, "flags": [ "NONCONDUCTIVE" ], diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/melee.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/melee.json index a2941f380a6dd..6cd65a88ef565 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/melee.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/melee.json @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ "copy-from": "spear_steel", "type": "GENERIC", "name": { "str": "Gungnir" }, - "description": "Gungnir, the spear of Odin. It is rumored to be the perfect spear, perfectly hitting any target regardless of the wielder's strength or skill. If feels like Odin's protecting you.", + "description": "Gungnir, the spear of Odin. It is rumored to be the perfect spear, perfectly hitting any target regardless of the wielder's strength or skill. It feels like Odin's protecting you.", "weight": "1854 g", "material": [ "orichalcum_metal", "wood", "gold" ], "techniques": [ "WBLOCK_1", "IMPALE", "SWEEP" ], diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/mutagen.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/mutagen.json index 0c63642fbeaec..9f047c39ab995 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/mutagen.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/mutagen.json @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ "copy-from": "iv_mutagen_flavor", "type": "COMESTIBLE", "name": "black dragon mutagenic primer", - "description": "A super-concentrated mutagen that seems swirl with the anger of a black dragon. Do you dare leave you humanity behind and inject it?", + "description": "A super-concentrated mutagen that seems to swirl with the anger of a black dragon. Do you dare leave your humanity behind and inject it?", "color": "black", "use_action": { "type": "consume_drug", diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/recipe_books.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/recipe_books.json index f03786f655856..bcda283c942a7 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/recipe_books.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/recipe_books.json @@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ "type": "BOOK", "category": "manuals", "name": { "str": "small notebook", "str_pl": "copies of small notebook" }, - "description": "Small old notebook without cover. There is some illegal potion recipes, that you can't find in common books", + "description": "Small old notebook without cover. There are some illegal potion recipes, that you can't find in common books", "weight": "260 g", "volume": "350 ml", "price": 13900, diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/spell_scrolls.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/spell_scrolls.json index 3bc081177425f..69f188da387ec 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/spell_scrolls.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/spell_scrolls.json @@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ "id": "spell_scroll_druid_healing_herb", "//": "Druid spell", "name": { "str": "Scroll of Floral Healing", "str_pl": "Scrolls of Floral Healing" }, - "description": "Using a magic energy from herbs allow you to heal yourself.", + "description": "Using magic energy from herbs to allows you to heal yourself.", "use_action": { "type": "learn_spell", "spells": [ "druid_healing_herb" ] } }, { @@ -484,7 +484,7 @@ "id": "spell_scroll_eshaper_melee_damage", "//": "Earthshaper spell", "name": { "str": "Scroll of Weighting", "str_pl": "Scrolls of Weighting" }, - "description": "Fill yourself with power of Earth, and make each your attack as devastating as quake.", + "description": "Fill yourself with the power of Earth, and make each your attacks as devastating as an earthquake.", "use_action": { "type": "learn_spell", "spells": [ "eshaper_melee_damage" ] } }, { @@ -493,7 +493,7 @@ "id": "spell_scroll_eshaper_crystal_wrap", "//": "Earthshaper spell", "name": { "str": "Scroll of Crystal Wrapping", "str_pl": "Scrolls of Crystal Wrapping" }, - "description": "Your cover your body with small layer of razor sharp crystals. It makes monster's, that attack you, take some damage in return, and gives you some additional cut damage in melee.", + "description": "You cover your body with a layer of razor sharp crystals. Monster that attack you will take some damage in return, and gives you some additional cut damage in melee.", "use_action": { "type": "learn_spell", "spells": [ "eshaper_crystal_wrap" ] } }, { @@ -1118,7 +1118,7 @@ "id": "spell_scroll_druidic_healing", "//": "Druid spell", "name": { "str": "Scroll of Sacrificial Healing", "str_pl": "Scrolls of Sacrificial Healing" }, - "description": "Channels some of the user's own life force into healing energy, for the sake of ones allies.", + "description": "Channels some of the user's own life force into healing energy, for the sake of one's allies.", "use_action": { "type": "learn_spell", "spells": [ "druidic_healing" ] } }, { @@ -1144,7 +1144,7 @@ "id": "spell_scroll_biomancer_visceral_projection", "//": "Biomancer spell", "name": { "str": "Scroll of Visceral Projection", "str_pl": "Scrolls of Visceral Projection" }, - "description": "Projects a spray of acrid blood and gore all around you, growing to ensnare your prey in in a field of twitching poisonous tendrils.", + "description": "Projects a spray of acrid blood and gore all around you, growing to ensnare your prey in a field of twitching poisonous tendrils.", "use_action": { "type": "learn_spell", "spells": [ "biomancer_visceral_projection" ] } }, { diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/spellbooks.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/spellbooks.json index 057662ba17603..3d0a6c6fab30b 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/spellbooks.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/items/spellbooks.json @@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ "category": "manuals", "//": "5 Stormshaper electric spells", "name": { "str": "How Electromancy Changed the Vietnam War", "str_pl": "copies of How Electromancy Changed the Vietnam War" }, - "description": "Deep work, that tells about the electromancy boom in the 60's, and how mass military draft of fresh, inexperienced scholars changed the war, with examples of using tactics and spells. Summary says \"it changed nothing\".", + "description": "Deep work, that tells about the electromancy boom in the 60's, and how the mass military draft of fresh, inexperienced scholars changed the war, with examples of using tactics and spells. Summary says \"it changed nothing\".", "weight": "378 g", "volume": "660 ml", "price": 11700, diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/monsters/monsters.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/monsters/monsters.json index 3bbed002362c3..b2a93b11734ac 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/monsters/monsters.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/monsters/monsters.json @@ -376,7 +376,7 @@ "id": "mon_baleful_polymorph_frog", "type": "MONSTER", "name": { "str": "frog" }, - "description": "A conspicuously average american bullfrog. You better keep prince charming away from it.", + "description": "A conspicuously average American bullfrog. You better keep prince charming away from it.", "default_faction": "magical_beast", "species": [ "AMPHIBIAN" ], "volume": "750 ml", @@ -460,7 +460,7 @@ "id": "mon_loup_garou", "type": "MONSTER", "name": { "str": "loup garou" }, - "description": "Previously thought extinct outside of rural Quebec and Louisiana this cursed creature has been known to breed with true wolves when it isn't madly destroying any signs of humanity in it's territory.", + "description": "Previously thought extinct outside of rural Quebec and Louisiana this cursed creature has been known to breed with true wolves when it isn't madly destroying any signs of humanity in its territory.", "default_faction": "wolf", "bodytype": "dog", "categories": [ "WILDLIFE" ], @@ -690,7 +690,7 @@ "id": "mon_electric_turret", "type": "MONSTER", "name": "thunder pillar", - "description": "It looks like a giant floating stone shard, but it's intelligent creature, that can use electric branches as their own bodies.", + "description": "It looks like a giant floating stone shard, but it's an intelligent creature, that can use electric branches as their own bodies.", "default_faction": "player", "volume": "218500 ml", "weight": "240000 g", @@ -713,26 +713,26 @@ "id": "turret_1", "type": "spell", "spell_data": { "id": "shocking_lash", "min_level": 20 }, - "monster_message": "", + "monster_message": "The pillar weaves electricity around itself!", "cooldown": 2 }, { "id": "turret_2", "type": "spell", "spell_data": { "id": "electric_turret_line", "min_level": 0 }, - "monster_message": "", + "monster_message": "The pillar weaves electricity around itself!", "cooldown": 13 }, { "id": "turret_3", "type": "spell", "spell_data": { "id": "electric_turret_blast", "min_level": 0 }, - "monster_message": "", + "monster_message": "The pillar weaves electricity around itself!", "cooldown": 9 } ], "harvest": "exempt", - "death_function": { "message": "A %s dissolve.", "corpse_type": "NO_CORPSE" }, + "death_function": { "message": "A %s dissolves.", "corpse_type": "NO_CORPSE" }, "flags": [ "SEES", "HEARS", diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/monsters/orcs.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/monsters/orcs.json index 4fe89104d5db2..c02782bdbb56e 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/monsters/orcs.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/monsters/orcs.json @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ "id": "mon_orc_warrior", "type": "MONSTER", "name": { "str": "orc warrior" }, - "description": "This green brute is a orc warrior. It stares at you menacingly, sword in hand.", + "description": "This green brute is an orc warrior. It stares at you menacingly, sword in hand.", "default_faction": "orcs", "bodytype": "human", "species": [ "ORC" ], @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ "type": "MONSTER", "copy-from": "mon_orc_warrior", "name": { "str": "blood orc" }, - "description": "This bloody red brute is a orc warrior. He stares at you menacingly, weapon in hand; this one seems to have bathed himself in the blood of his enemies.", + "description": "This bloody red brute is an orc warrior. He stares at you menacingly, weapon in hand; this one seems to have bathed himself in the blood of his enemies.", "hp": 97, "dodge": 3, "aggression": 100, diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/monsters/zombified_monsters.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/monsters/zombified_monsters.json index 7fe6588ef65a7..eb5ef7b56e0f2 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/monsters/zombified_monsters.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/monsters/zombified_monsters.json @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ "id": "mon_were_zolf", "type": "MONSTER", "name": { "str": "rotting wolf man" }, - "description": "The classic half man half wolf of the movies, but with a new twist: UNDEATH! This monster lopes along alternating between two and four legged gaits. It's jet black eyes seething with unsiatable hunger. Now you will know why you fear the night.", + "description": "The classic half man half wolf of the movies, but with a new twist: UNDEATH! This monster lopes along alternating between two and four legged gaits. It's jet black eyes seething with insatiable hunger. Now you will know why you fear the night.", "default_faction": "zombie", "bodytype": "dog", "categories": [ "CLASSIC" ], @@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ "type": "MONSTER", "id": "mon_yulecat_zombie", "name": "Zombified Yule Cat", - "description": "A magical beast from Icelandic folklore, known for their catlike appearance and their hobby of eating Workshop Elves. It creeply stumbles on its 4 legs with its squirming uneven body after meeting demise and being reborn just to eat you.", + "description": "A magical beast from Icelandic folklore, known for their catlike appearance and their hobby of eating Workshop Elves. It creepily stumbles on its 4 legs with its squirming uneven body after meeting demise and being reborn just to eat you.", "looks_like": "mon_yulecat", "default_faction": "zombie", "species": [ "MAGICAL_BEAST", "ZOMBIE" ], @@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ "id": "mon_yulecat_zombie_brute", "copy-from": "mon_yulecat_zombie", "name": "Tod Cat", - "description": "Once used to its decomposed body, this nightmarish cat with thick teeth and razorshap claws seems to be looking around for things to \"play\" with. Though its head is of a feline, it grins at you sadisticly with a glint in its cold demonic eyes.", + "description": "Once used to its decomposed body, this nightmarish cat with thick teeth and razorshap claws seems to be looking around for things to \"play\" with. Though its head is of a feline, it grins at you sadistically with a glint in its cold demonic eyes.", "path_settings": { "max_dist": 17 }, "relative": { "hp": 65, diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/mutations/mutations.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/mutations/mutations.json index 25df2acbcb7f3..c207dc3b8da45 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/mutations/mutations.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/mutations/mutations.json @@ -439,7 +439,7 @@ "points": 1, "visibility": 9, "ugliness": 4, - "description": "You have a pair of large, black scaled dragon wings. While you have control of them and can make attacks with them, they are not large enough nor strong enough to allow you to fly and they throw your off balance, greatly reducing your ability to dodge. They can be used to cast a protective spell on yourself however.", + "description": "You have a pair of large, black scaled dragon wings. While you have control of them and can make attacks with them, they are not large enough nor strong enough to allow you to fly and they throw you off balance, greatly reducing your ability to dodge. They can be used to cast a protective spell on yourself however.", "types": [ "WINGS" ], "prereqs": [ "WINGS_STUB" ], "category": [ "DRAGON_BLACK" ], diff --git a/data/mods/Magiclysm/professions.json b/data/mods/Magiclysm/professions.json index 1df48c454a33d..4f4997c91d30f 100644 --- a/data/mods/Magiclysm/professions.json +++ b/data/mods/Magiclysm/professions.json @@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ "type": "profession", "id": "novice_earthshaper", "name": "Novice Earthshaper", - "description": "You always were tough in a fight. Your coach managed to teach you a trick or two to make you a little tougher.", + "description": "You were always tough in a fight. Your coach managed to teach you a trick or two to make you a little tougher.", "spells": [ { "id": "stonefist", "level": 1 }, { "id": "seismic_stomp", "level": 1 } ], "points": 0, "items": { @@ -497,7 +497,7 @@ "type": "profession", "id": "storm_police", "name": "Shock Officer", - "description": "You were enrolled in a experimental law enforcement program designed to decrease suspect casualties and equipment costs by substituting tasers and bullets for less-lethal Stormshaping.", + "description": "You were enrolled in an experimental law enforcement program designed to decrease suspect casualties and equipment costs by substituting tasers and bullets for less-lethal Stormshaping.", "points": 4, "spells": [ { "id": "windstrike", "level": 3 },